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Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Hello, Guest!!!
Today, it is my pleasure to introduce to you our official character creation contest!! Big prizes, big participation rewards, and full board voting for the winners!! Voting procures will be discussed after all entries have been submitted. ;) Please keep in mind that originality is preferred and, of course, to remember to keep to the Contest Theme.
The top 2-3 entries (depending on how many submissions we have) will have their characters used by me as villains (main villain role is not guaranteed) in in Future Force Role-Play in the main plot and will be rewarded with 1,000 GP. Additionally, the top winner will be given a special, secondary text rank of "Master Character Creator." All participants will be awarded with 500 GP just for submitting, so please join in on the fun with us and submit your characters in this thread!
**You do not have to actually role-play in Future Force to participate in this contest. If you are still interested in seeing your character used in the role-play and you aren't in the role-play, you will be linked to any and all necessary references where he or she is present. Just read the discussions thread for the role-play to find out any character creation information.**
Creation and Submission Period --
April 2nd, 2013 - May 2nd, 2013
Voting Period --
May 3rd, 2013 - May 9th, 2013
Contest Theme --
I would like your character to be inspired by one of the following songs and/or their lyrics:
"Titanium" featuring Sia by David Guetta
"Skyrim Theme" by Lindsey Stirling & Peter Hollens
"Pendulum" by Shiki
"Viva La Vida" by Coldplay
"Radioactive" by Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix
Contest Layout --
(Don't forget to scroll down!)
Today, it is my pleasure to introduce to you our official character creation contest!! Big prizes, big participation rewards, and full board voting for the winners!! Voting procures will be discussed after all entries have been submitted. ;) Please keep in mind that originality is preferred and, of course, to remember to keep to the Contest Theme.
The top 2-3 entries (depending on how many submissions we have) will have their characters used by me as villains (main villain role is not guaranteed) in in Future Force Role-Play in the main plot and will be rewarded with 1,000 GP. Additionally, the top winner will be given a special, secondary text rank of "Master Character Creator." All participants will be awarded with 500 GP just for submitting, so please join in on the fun with us and submit your characters in this thread!
**You do not have to actually role-play in Future Force to participate in this contest. If you are still interested in seeing your character used in the role-play and you aren't in the role-play, you will be linked to any and all necessary references where he or she is present. Just read the discussions thread for the role-play to find out any character creation information.**
Creation and Submission Period --
April 2nd, 2013 - May 2nd, 2013
Voting Period --
May 3rd, 2013 - May 9th, 2013
Contest Theme --
I would like your character to be inspired by one of the following songs and/or their lyrics:
"Titanium" featuring Sia by David Guetta
"Skyrim Theme" by Lindsey Stirling & Peter Hollens
"Pendulum" by Shiki
"Viva La Vida" by Coldplay
"Radioactive" by Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix
Contest Layout --
(Don't forget to scroll down!)
- Code:
[b]Contest Theme Choice:[/b] **Please list the song you used for your inspiration.**
[b]Name:[/b] **First and last name, please.**
[b]Age:[/b] **Minimum of 14 years of age; Maximum of 100 years of age.**
[b]Gender:[/b] **Your Choice**
[b]Appearance:[/b] **Image Here**
[b]User Unit :[/b] **1-6, 1 being mastery and 6 being new.**
[b]Registry Code:[/b] **Code must have seven digits and consist of both numbers and letters**
[b]User Abilities:[/b] *Force names and descriptions—at least five to six sentences on each description. You can have only up to two force abilities.**
[b]Hometown/City/Reservation:[/b] **Please see the role-play map.**
[b]Occupation (if any):[/b] **Do you work for a company or are you self employed? Etc.**
[b]Skills/Hobbies (if any):[/b] **This includes both combat and non-combative skills.**
[b]Financial/Societal Caste:[/b] **Are you wealthy, poor, etc?**
[b]Weapons (if any):[/b] **Please list both your proficiencies and what you have equipped.**
[b]Equipment (if any):[/b] **Please note any and all belongings on your character.**
[b]Back Story:[/b] **Character History, please.**
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: "Titanium" featuring Sia by David Guetta
Additional Thanks to Jack-o-Panda: for Suggesting Force Chaos, that helped inspire this character and force - Order
Name: Ael'vin Filonistaer
Age: 43
Gender: Male
Bloodline/Lineage: Keltan
Appearance: Link: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/2011725 or Image:
Registry Code: Screw the Registry and their 'Codes'
User Abilities: Force - Order: Using the force of Order allows its user to employ it in a number of varying ways. It can strengthen/improve an existing force/object. It can be used to reduce the waste of ether of other forces, making them more efficient. It can be used to remove weakness/corrosion and even purify an object or person. Its most notable feature is being able to 'refine' and even crystallize Ether into a stable form. Ael'vin's effective range is up to 1000 meters, it does not require line of sight or contact to be used.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Lives on one of the many islands between Gru'ait and Mc'Terra
Occupation (if any): None
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Hunting/Gathering, Blacksmith, Sword/knife/halberd/shield Combat, Explosives, Acute Observation, and Listening, First-aid/Surgical skills.
Financial/Societal Caste: Independent Wanderer
Weapons (if any): Bastard Sword, Knives (several)
Equipment (if any): Full body armor, First Aid kit, Cloak, small boat with ether engine
Back Story:
Additional Thanks to Jack-o-Panda: for Suggesting Force Chaos, that helped inspire this character and force - Order
Name: Ael'vin Filonistaer
Age: 43
Gender: Male
Bloodline/Lineage: Keltan
Appearance: Link: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/2011725 or Image:
- Spoiler:
Registry Code: Screw the Registry and their 'Codes'
User Abilities: Force - Order: Using the force of Order allows its user to employ it in a number of varying ways. It can strengthen/improve an existing force/object. It can be used to reduce the waste of ether of other forces, making them more efficient. It can be used to remove weakness/corrosion and even purify an object or person. Its most notable feature is being able to 'refine' and even crystallize Ether into a stable form. Ael'vin's effective range is up to 1000 meters, it does not require line of sight or contact to be used.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Lives on one of the many islands between Gru'ait and Mc'Terra
Occupation (if any): None
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Hunting/Gathering, Blacksmith, Sword/knife/halberd/shield Combat, Explosives, Acute Observation, and Listening, First-aid/Surgical skills.
Financial/Societal Caste: Independent Wanderer
Weapons (if any): Bastard Sword, Knives (several)
Equipment (if any): Full body armor, First Aid kit, Cloak, small boat with ether engine
Back Story:
- Spoiler:
- "One day Son, all those self-serving control freaks will be purged, and when that happens we won't have to hide anymore... One day, one day." That was his Great-Uncle's mantra, and the code that he lived by. He'd raised his great-nephew up on a remote island at the request of his parents. His parents not wanting to be cast in a dark light by their force wielding son. The day that his parents had caught him on the ocean glowing, the sky had been shimmering in waves of Ether like a sky-born sea, they had given him over to his Great-Uncle. Raised by extremely isolation happy survivalist he was kept from the spot-light. Trained by the man, it took forever to learn his power. When the man died Ael'vin soon stepped out of that life style and went to reservations to further train his powers.
As the years passed Ael'vin mastered his power, and slowly attempted to get used to nature of cities on what he called educational excursions. More and more the news spread of terrorists, the growing strength of the Elven Hinterland. So much mad possible by such a simple genetic inheritance: Force. At first he tried to help train and strengthen growing force users near Gru'ait in its more remote locations, occasionally apprenticing them and helping them improve. After all, if they learned responsibility and control they wouldn't be liable to branch into terrorism and become criminals. However this was dashed as many became so anyway. The growing dependance of Ether Tech further alienating Force Users and slowly thinned them out.
Once long ago according to his Great-Uncle before Ether Tech, long into the annals of history, Force users had not been the downtrodden weak outcasts they where now. It had been with the growth of Ether Furnaces and Refineries that the Ether of the world had been diminished and their people had slowly died off, as had the Keltan Wolves their ether beast guardians.
Too long had Ael'vin been hidden away from the world, too long his people had suffered and scattered like sand into the wind. He would search out the source of this discourse, and while he was about it, he'd see about finding any remaining Ether Beasts or his Keltan brethren.
The Elven Hinterland and the Elven Supremacy spoke of ether freedom, but they where a bunch of self-delusional idiots. Their whole economy was dependent on Ether, while their people fell into rampant ether abuse and addiction. The real answer would be to purge the need for Ether Tech, that would be a true Ether Freedom they wished for. Their wasn't anyone out there willing to be strong enough to bring that about, no one except Ael'vin.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Song choice: Lindsey Stirling, Skyrim theme.
Name: Gareth Everdale "The Maker"
Age: 28
Gender: male
Appearance: http://jackskillet.deviantart.com/art/LS-AdiKartika-II-73558725?q=favby%3Ajackskillet%2F45341571&qo=186
User Unit : UU1
Registry Code: A5SY02X
User Abilities:
Force Teraform: this force gives Gareth the ability to modify near by landscapes to his liking, he can pretty much modify anything, make a forest, a desert, a lake etc.
He can modify the form the land has itself, create small mountains, create a crater, etc. but for big projects of the sort it would take a long time, due to the energy consumption and the range limit on his force, to create a mountain, he would have to climb it gradually, same thing if he wants to make a large crater.
The force itself is pretty fast working though, if he wants to make a small pond, it will happen in just a few seconds.
Force Gravity: Gareth has the ability to change the gravity in a small zone, heightening or lowering it drastically. He may also do the same on one object or person Instead of a full zone if he so wishes, this includes himself.
Hometown/City/Reservation: None, he live in his own created "temple"
Occupation (if any): leader of his own cult.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Gareth is quite skilled with a rapier, he is an amazing speech giver and is very convincing in every thing he says, be it a lie or not. He also knows a lot about the human anatomy and he is a genius in general.
Financial/Societal Caste: He could be considered rich due to all the offerings his cultists give him.
Weapons (if any): A rapier and two pistols.
Equipment (if any):
-medical kit
-"bible"
-symbol of the Maker
Back Story: Gareth was born in a reservation, from a young age his force awakened, but he never really used it due to any force user being frowned upon. He went into medical school instead.
He always found life was such a bore. Until the day that he finally did use his force in public, and multiple people, despite being afraid, compared him to the Maker himself.
This gave Gareth an idea to make life more interesting. He went off on his own and practice his force until it was perfect, making his own domain with it. Far up in the mountains laid his lair.
Once he had finally mastered his force he started traveling the world, going from village to village, saying he was a reincarnation of the makers, and bringing any followers/believers back to his lair with him.
And like that he basically began a cult, with him, being the very god of it.
Name: Gareth Everdale "The Maker"
Age: 28
Gender: male
Appearance: http://jackskillet.deviantart.com/art/LS-AdiKartika-II-73558725?q=favby%3Ajackskillet%2F45341571&qo=186
User Unit : UU1
Registry Code: A5SY02X
User Abilities:
Force Teraform: this force gives Gareth the ability to modify near by landscapes to his liking, he can pretty much modify anything, make a forest, a desert, a lake etc.
He can modify the form the land has itself, create small mountains, create a crater, etc. but for big projects of the sort it would take a long time, due to the energy consumption and the range limit on his force, to create a mountain, he would have to climb it gradually, same thing if he wants to make a large crater.
The force itself is pretty fast working though, if he wants to make a small pond, it will happen in just a few seconds.
Force Gravity: Gareth has the ability to change the gravity in a small zone, heightening or lowering it drastically. He may also do the same on one object or person Instead of a full zone if he so wishes, this includes himself.
Hometown/City/Reservation: None, he live in his own created "temple"
Occupation (if any): leader of his own cult.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Gareth is quite skilled with a rapier, he is an amazing speech giver and is very convincing in every thing he says, be it a lie or not. He also knows a lot about the human anatomy and he is a genius in general.
Financial/Societal Caste: He could be considered rich due to all the offerings his cultists give him.
Weapons (if any): A rapier and two pistols.
Equipment (if any):
-medical kit
-"bible"
-symbol of the Maker
Back Story: Gareth was born in a reservation, from a young age his force awakened, but he never really used it due to any force user being frowned upon. He went into medical school instead.
He always found life was such a bore. Until the day that he finally did use his force in public, and multiple people, despite being afraid, compared him to the Maker himself.
This gave Gareth an idea to make life more interesting. He went off on his own and practice his force until it was perfect, making his own domain with it. Far up in the mountains laid his lair.
Once he had finally mastered his force he started traveling the world, going from village to village, saying he was a reincarnation of the makers, and bringing any followers/believers back to his lair with him.
And like that he basically began a cult, with him, being the very god of it.
Guest- Guest
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: "Skyrim Theme" by Lindsey Stirling & Peter Hollens
Name: Lalartu Amelatu Kia
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Appearance: All credit goes to the original artist, alanlathwell.
User Unit : 1
Registry Code: XX0rCu5
User Abilities:
Earth Shield - This ability creates a barrier of earth around the user. The user can shape the barrier in any form they want, but they are limited with movement. They may form walls or "bubbles" to suit the situation. The earth they move can be up to 30 feet away. The user can "ride" the earth if they choose to turn this into an offensive attack. It is best suited as a defensive skill and requires strong will and concentration.
Earth Meld - This ability allows the user to meld into the earth. The user may then move at will through the earth, however long periods underground can lead to loss of direction and all senses become useless. It is best to use this ability in short bursts, picking locations to appear at and moving to it. While in the earth, movement speed increases tremendously, which means one unused to the ability will overshoot their target locations every time. Further, this ability allows one to meld into "anything" made of earth, which may allow the user to pass through solid walls.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Aeyterus
Occupation (if any): Bounty Hunter
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Non-combative: Fishing, Hunting, Tracking, Pottery-Making.
Combative: Martial Arts; Jeet Kun Do, Jiu-jitsu, Self-Taught Style, & Grappling.
Sword Arts; Kendo, Kyoto Ryu (bladeless), Niten-Ichi-Ryu, & Kenjutsu.
Financial/Societal Caste: Vagabond, Poor.
Weapons (if any): Proficiencies - Greatsword, Daggers, Revolver, & Unarmed Combat
Equipped - Greatsword, Daggers, Sword Breaker Dagger, & Single-Action Six-Shooter Revolver.
Favored Sword Forms: Emptiness, Kissing the Adder, Parting the Silk, Rain in High Wind, The Serpent Strikes, Wind and Rain, & The Wolf Lunges.
Equipment (if any): Set of leather armor, intersparced with chain.
Dagger Vest.
Wool cloak.
Rations.
Munitions pouch containing around 160 revolver shells.
Back Story:
Name: Lalartu Amelatu Kia
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Appearance: All credit goes to the original artist, alanlathwell.
- Spoiler:
User Unit : 1
Registry Code: XX0rCu5
User Abilities:
Earth Shield - This ability creates a barrier of earth around the user. The user can shape the barrier in any form they want, but they are limited with movement. They may form walls or "bubbles" to suit the situation. The earth they move can be up to 30 feet away. The user can "ride" the earth if they choose to turn this into an offensive attack. It is best suited as a defensive skill and requires strong will and concentration.
Earth Meld - This ability allows the user to meld into the earth. The user may then move at will through the earth, however long periods underground can lead to loss of direction and all senses become useless. It is best to use this ability in short bursts, picking locations to appear at and moving to it. While in the earth, movement speed increases tremendously, which means one unused to the ability will overshoot their target locations every time. Further, this ability allows one to meld into "anything" made of earth, which may allow the user to pass through solid walls.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Aeyterus
Occupation (if any): Bounty Hunter
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Non-combative: Fishing, Hunting, Tracking, Pottery-Making.
Combative: Martial Arts; Jeet Kun Do, Jiu-jitsu, Self-Taught Style, & Grappling.
Sword Arts; Kendo, Kyoto Ryu (bladeless), Niten-Ichi-Ryu, & Kenjutsu.
Financial/Societal Caste: Vagabond, Poor.
Weapons (if any): Proficiencies - Greatsword, Daggers, Revolver, & Unarmed Combat
Equipped - Greatsword, Daggers, Sword Breaker Dagger, & Single-Action Six-Shooter Revolver.
Favored Sword Forms: Emptiness, Kissing the Adder, Parting the Silk, Rain in High Wind, The Serpent Strikes, Wind and Rain, & The Wolf Lunges.
Equipment (if any): Set of leather armor, intersparced with chain.
Dagger Vest.
Wool cloak.
Rations.
Munitions pouch containing around 160 revolver shells.
Back Story:
- Spoiler:
- Lalartu's life is littered with the deaths of kin & kith, as if he were a curse. His family was simple, they taught him the things he needed to know to survive and soon after they passed from the world. His life revolved around his parents until the age of eight, when they suddenly died. He managed to eek out a life alone until a year later he was captured by slavers.
During his time as a slave he was forced to do hard labor, and when he wasn't working he was fighting, his life on the line in the gambling den of an arena. Angered and outraged, he tried to flee from his captors at the age of eleven. He had managed to evade capture for three days, and the next morning when he awoke he was back in the main slaver camp, in his old bed, fresh lashing on his back, though he did not remember getting them, only the pain they gave him then. His slave's life continued for three more years, when he reached the age of fourteen. He had had enough. He broke out during his time in the arena, slaying a few of his captor's as he left, but as he exited into the nearby forest, he blacked out. When he awoke he was covered in blood, a pile of bodies around him and fresh gashes upon his body and a broken sword in hand.
The next several years of his life he devoted to being a mercenary. It was also during this time that his powers began to manifest. He fought for money and a balance with his new found powers over earth. He was controlled, kept in check as a mercenary, but the life was dull and he felt as if he were back in the slave's arena, day after day.
By the age of twenty, he left the mercenaries and sought only to better himself and his abilities with the earth. He struggled with his powers at first and the price he paid for them without the constant supplies he had in the mercenary corp. He soon found that if he relied more on himself first he could develop his power slowly over time, while keeping a check on his price and gathering money as he needed to replenish his power.
The age of twenty-five was when things changed for him, he became a bounty hunter. At first, he merely used it as a regulator to keep his powers in check, but soon he found that he enjoyed hunting people. There was a thrill in the hunt, something he had never felt before. There was also something else occurring. He began to glean memories of his past that he had never known. He knew who, what, had caused the death of his parents, but he honestly did not care anymore.
His life now was about survival, those who had ever been close to him had died, those who had tormented him had stayed, until he silenced them himself. There was a small group that he trusted, and even then he warned them not to trust him, telling them one day they may find themselves on his blade.
During one of his "hunts" his unfortunate victim, shot him with a gun. A mistake he paid for with his life, but it was at that time that Lalartu learned the value of firearms. He quickly found a gun that did not merely kill, it tested his skill, something that suited him strongly, like his blade. The single action revolver became a fine addition to his armaments and as he continued to use it he became more skilled with it, even enjoying the tension of having to reload during battle.
His life has continued, the only peace he has ever known is the time he spends fishing and a wash of tranquility comes over him. These moments are sparse, for he continues to fight to survive in the world. He has never worried about making a name for himself, only improving and moving to the next challenge. He is hoping his next targets actually test his skill in battle rather than in hunting.- Spoiler:
- One day, when he was still young I awoke. I don't really recall when, but I remember him forcing me back under the surface quickly, we fought for control, backwards and forward. We both learned from his parents, survival was all that mattered. I saw how they treated him when he was out there, the things they provided. When I felt we had learned enough to continue in life, I killed them, his parents. It was the first time I ever extended my will and it was glorious. I maintained control and he never seem to know why his parents had passed away, what we had done with his hands. No, my hands. His body it was mine.
I got him captured by a slaver and sold into the markets. The physical labor tormented him and the fighting honed his bodies' reflexes. He tried to escape at one point, and it seemed he would have, till I took control. I walked him back into the camp and he was captured immediately. I tried to influence his life more, make him submit and push him under the surface, so he could see what it was like to be confined all day everyday. I gave him wounds he never remembered except for the pain they caused him during his waking hours. I was subtle, smart. He focused on living, but his body, it was mine. I would make him submit.
He broke free of the slaver's, killing a few. It was impressive. I felt awe at what his body could do. It would be mine. I took control as he escaped, thinking to make his life worse, but due to the deaths, the slaver's simply wanted HIM dead. I couldn't allow that, his body was mine, would be mine forever. He would break. They all died, while I laughed and hummed a tune his mother had used as a lullaby.
It's harder now. He has taken full control. He won't break, he keeps getting stronger, but I am still here. I see flashes of armor and metal, sometimes waking in the middle of battles. It is like he is seeking death now, or mastery of something new. He has powers now, powers I have never felt, I have mastered basic use of them, but he grows stronger.
He has left the front lines. It grows ever harder to wake from my slumbers. Why won't he break? I have injured him in so many ways, but he continues to grow, never backing down. I will find a moment, his body will be mine.
Something has changed. He knows of my presence. I can feel him tapping into my memories. He hunts now, surviving, growing stronger. I'll have to bind my time. His body is so powerful now. I must have it, it is mine after all.
I killed a few more of those he called friend. His torment pleases me, but he no longer sheds tears for them. I fear I may be pushed under for good. I cannot allow that, but his body IS mine. I will have it, someday. I will never go away Lalartu. I will always be with you, as you will always be with me. I WILL find a moment to weaken you, your hold over my body. And then, I can finally live, while you watch.
Guest- Guest
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Notice:
I am now allowing up to two submissions per person!
I have added a song to the Contest Theme! Enjoy!
I am now allowing up to two submissions per person!
I have added a song to the Contest Theme! Enjoy!
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Radioactive-Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix
Name: Zieth Ballad
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://jackskillet.deviantart.com/art/Concept-287094236?q=favby%3Ajackskillet%2F45341571&qo=109
User Unit : UU2/UU3
Registry Code: K6ER49L
User Abilities: Force Decay (UU3): When Zieth activates his force, a small zone around him immediately begins to decay. Anything in the zone decays, including people. Of course it's not instantaneous, but the decaying process is still quite fast.
People that are in the zone will see and feel their skin beginning to rot before their very eyes, as it eats at them slowly but surely.
Force Toxicity (UU2): When this force is active, Zieth's body becomes hazardous. If his skin comes in contact with another person or thing, he secretes a devastating toxin that eats at its prey from the inside. The secreted toxin works fast and is quite affective, it seeps into a persons skin or into an object, once again, eating at it like termites. Though once again, this force is not instantaneous, the persons body will not be devoured in the matter of seconds, it can take hours or minutes , depending on the amount of toxin and the placement. Of course if the toxin was directly injected into a vital organ, it will be more dangerous and must be treated quickly.
In addition to this, if Zieth is cut, a toxic cloud with the same proprieties is released from his wound, though, this must be inhaled to have effect. (this applies for any open wound, including gunshot)
Hometown/City/Reservation: Somewhere in the wild. L
Occupation (if any): Zieth is a runaway, he ran away from home and hid in the wild.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Quite resistant to pain, Intermediate spear fighting, Intermediate with bow and arrows, good at setting various kinds of improvised traps, knows how to use a bolas, good survival skills, has a good knowledge of herbs and can use them for various things, he had also learned how to improvise tools with found materials, this includes arrows, he also knows how to hunt and is quite good at climbing trees.
As for hobbies, he used to like playing with his friends outside or sparring with them with his old wooden spear, before he ran away. Now he focuses on survival.
Financial/Societal Caste: Doesn't have money, lives in the wild.
Weapons (if any): His fathers battle spear (intermediate) and bow (with quiver and arrows.)(Intermediate).
Equipment (if any):
-Bolas
-Arrows (Often makes more)
-A whole set of tools (pretty much any tool you can think of)
-Herb pouch. (Filled with various herbs)
-First aid kit (Running low on stuff in this)
-Skinning knife
Back Story: Zieth was born in a small village. Both his parents did not have any forces, and both were anti force users, as well as most of the village. They were poor, and Zieth's goal was to join the army, so he went to the small school they had in the village as well as training with his father, to learn how to use a spear and a bow.
His mother had a hobby, which was herbalism, and she always showed him diverse herbs she would cultivate, and which ones were useful as opposed to which ones weren't or could have negative effects.
One thing that made Zieth different than other children, however he did keep this a secret, he had a fascination with the decaying process of bodies after they had passed away. He tried studying it in secret, but could never really do it, due to him never really being alone, and a dead body isn't that easy to come by.
Though, one day, life decided to make his fascination easier for him, his first force awakened, during his spar with another teenager. Zieth didn't know how to deactivate it and the poor boy nearly decayed to death.
From that point on, Zieth was the freak of the village, not only to the villagers, but to his parents as well. In fact, his father didn't teach him anymore, instead, he beat him. This happened countless times, for quite the long lapse of time.
Zieth's life had gone from joyful, to horrible. After about a year of repetitive beatings and mistreatment, his second force awakened when he simply wished to never be touched again.
Once again, life granted him this wish, force Toxicity kept every one at bay. But this didn't stop the verbal mistreatments, or the rock throwing, or anything really...
So at 16 he ran away from the village, stealing a good amount of his parents equipment and leaving in the night. Since then, he has been surviving in the wilderness. He had also abandoned his scanner at the village.
He built himself a tree house and that has been his residence ever since.
Name: Zieth Ballad
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://jackskillet.deviantart.com/art/Concept-287094236?q=favby%3Ajackskillet%2F45341571&qo=109
User Unit : UU2/UU3
Registry Code: K6ER49L
User Abilities: Force Decay (UU3): When Zieth activates his force, a small zone around him immediately begins to decay. Anything in the zone decays, including people. Of course it's not instantaneous, but the decaying process is still quite fast.
People that are in the zone will see and feel their skin beginning to rot before their very eyes, as it eats at them slowly but surely.
Force Toxicity (UU2): When this force is active, Zieth's body becomes hazardous. If his skin comes in contact with another person or thing, he secretes a devastating toxin that eats at its prey from the inside. The secreted toxin works fast and is quite affective, it seeps into a persons skin or into an object, once again, eating at it like termites. Though once again, this force is not instantaneous, the persons body will not be devoured in the matter of seconds, it can take hours or minutes , depending on the amount of toxin and the placement. Of course if the toxin was directly injected into a vital organ, it will be more dangerous and must be treated quickly.
In addition to this, if Zieth is cut, a toxic cloud with the same proprieties is released from his wound, though, this must be inhaled to have effect. (this applies for any open wound, including gunshot)
Hometown/City/Reservation: Somewhere in the wild. L
Occupation (if any): Zieth is a runaway, he ran away from home and hid in the wild.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Quite resistant to pain, Intermediate spear fighting, Intermediate with bow and arrows, good at setting various kinds of improvised traps, knows how to use a bolas, good survival skills, has a good knowledge of herbs and can use them for various things, he had also learned how to improvise tools with found materials, this includes arrows, he also knows how to hunt and is quite good at climbing trees.
As for hobbies, he used to like playing with his friends outside or sparring with them with his old wooden spear, before he ran away. Now he focuses on survival.
Financial/Societal Caste: Doesn't have money, lives in the wild.
Weapons (if any): His fathers battle spear (intermediate) and bow (with quiver and arrows.)(Intermediate).
Equipment (if any):
-Bolas
-Arrows (Often makes more)
-A whole set of tools (pretty much any tool you can think of)
-Herb pouch. (Filled with various herbs)
-First aid kit (Running low on stuff in this)
-Skinning knife
Back Story: Zieth was born in a small village. Both his parents did not have any forces, and both were anti force users, as well as most of the village. They were poor, and Zieth's goal was to join the army, so he went to the small school they had in the village as well as training with his father, to learn how to use a spear and a bow.
His mother had a hobby, which was herbalism, and she always showed him diverse herbs she would cultivate, and which ones were useful as opposed to which ones weren't or could have negative effects.
One thing that made Zieth different than other children, however he did keep this a secret, he had a fascination with the decaying process of bodies after they had passed away. He tried studying it in secret, but could never really do it, due to him never really being alone, and a dead body isn't that easy to come by.
Though, one day, life decided to make his fascination easier for him, his first force awakened, during his spar with another teenager. Zieth didn't know how to deactivate it and the poor boy nearly decayed to death.
From that point on, Zieth was the freak of the village, not only to the villagers, but to his parents as well. In fact, his father didn't teach him anymore, instead, he beat him. This happened countless times, for quite the long lapse of time.
Zieth's life had gone from joyful, to horrible. After about a year of repetitive beatings and mistreatment, his second force awakened when he simply wished to never be touched again.
Once again, life granted him this wish, force Toxicity kept every one at bay. But this didn't stop the verbal mistreatments, or the rock throwing, or anything really...
So at 16 he ran away from the village, stealing a good amount of his parents equipment and leaving in the night. Since then, he has been surviving in the wilderness. He had also abandoned his scanner at the village.
He built himself a tree house and that has been his residence ever since.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Radioactive by Pentatonix (Only because it is stuck in my head now. Think of Wagner for him as a character.)
Name: Quinn Andreus
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://ninjatic.deviantart.com/art/White-Gaze-273633344?q=gallery%3Aninjatic%2F18309&qo=19
User Unit : NA
Registry Code: NA
User Abilities: NA
Hometown/City/Reservation: Main residence: Coldrion, but has apartments in other cities
Occupation (if any): New president of Aria Health Services (AHS) The largest supplier of medical equipment in Aria
Skills/Hobbies (if any): He is a classical music enthusiast and practices Tai Chi to help him relax.
Financial/Societal Caste: Extremely wealthy
Weapons (if any): He carries a small handgun under his suit coat.(Let me know if I need to change)
Equipment (if any): When in the cities he does not carry much. When he travels he hires guards for protection.
Back Story: Quinn was born wealthy, and by some standards is spoiled. He is not a brat though. He worked hard to learn his father's business and helped him expand it to the empire it is today. Now that his father is gone, he will be sure to continue the expansion. He is single, one of the most eligible bachelors in Aria. He is a hands on kind of boss, wanting to keep all his employees happy. He tolerates Force Users, but is not one himself.
Name: Quinn Andreus
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://ninjatic.deviantart.com/art/White-Gaze-273633344?q=gallery%3Aninjatic%2F18309&qo=19
User Unit : NA
Registry Code: NA
User Abilities: NA
Hometown/City/Reservation: Main residence: Coldrion, but has apartments in other cities
Occupation (if any): New president of Aria Health Services (AHS) The largest supplier of medical equipment in Aria
Skills/Hobbies (if any): He is a classical music enthusiast and practices Tai Chi to help him relax.
Financial/Societal Caste: Extremely wealthy
Weapons (if any): He carries a small handgun under his suit coat.(Let me know if I need to change)
Equipment (if any): When in the cities he does not carry much. When he travels he hires guards for protection.
Back Story: Quinn was born wealthy, and by some standards is spoiled. He is not a brat though. He worked hard to learn his father's business and helped him expand it to the empire it is today. Now that his father is gone, he will be sure to continue the expansion. He is single, one of the most eligible bachelors in Aria. He is a hands on kind of boss, wanting to keep all his employees happy. He tolerates Force Users, but is not one himself.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: "Skyrim Theme" by Lindsey Stirling & Peter Hollens
Name: Lyra Barrington
Age: 38 years old
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://lycilia.deviantart.com/art/steampunk-253012799
User Unit: UU1
Registry Code: B14ck69
User Abilities: Force Metal: She would be able to ability to bend and fuse metal alkaloids into different shapes and sizes. She would be able to un-fuse the metal alkaloids as well and dissolving the metal into liquid being able to then encase objects inside the metal as she makes it whole again.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Ilkairteon
Occupation (if any): Works for the Octavius M. Donahan Academy in Ilkairteon
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Is an artist. She uses her force to create works of art. She is a pianist as well. Her skills include that of making great weapons and defensive gear as well.
Financial/Societal Caste: Upper middle class. Has some money, but works and uses the money that she earns for a living to support her desires of what she really wants.
Weapons (if any): Prophecies: Swords, Throwing knives, guns. Equipped: Curved sword that she keeps with her as well as a Choridum Injection Gun at her side she keeps for personal protection some nails and screws.
Equipment (if any): Keeps a curved sword on her as well as a Choridum Injection Gun , a large enough personal bag say like a pocketbook that she keeps shots for her gun in, 20 medium size screws, 10 large nails and five small nails made of the metal alkaloids that she can control to use as weapons when needed.
Back Story: Lyra is the youngest of a family with six children. She is the only female and the only force user of the family. For this she was shunned and looked down upon. Her family disowned her and sent her away to never return. For this, years of pent up anger has stayed hidden in her heart. She has not only been looked down upon by her family, but by those she has seen on the streets and even by those she thought was friends and those she trusted. She trusts no one and looks to one day make people see that Force users are just as good if not better than regular humans. She holds anger at those who oppose her and any other force user and will one day make non force users regret being alive.
Name: Lyra Barrington
Age: 38 years old
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://lycilia.deviantart.com/art/steampunk-253012799
User Unit: UU1
Registry Code: B14ck69
User Abilities: Force Metal: She would be able to ability to bend and fuse metal alkaloids into different shapes and sizes. She would be able to un-fuse the metal alkaloids as well and dissolving the metal into liquid being able to then encase objects inside the metal as she makes it whole again.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Ilkairteon
Occupation (if any): Works for the Octavius M. Donahan Academy in Ilkairteon
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Is an artist. She uses her force to create works of art. She is a pianist as well. Her skills include that of making great weapons and defensive gear as well.
Financial/Societal Caste: Upper middle class. Has some money, but works and uses the money that she earns for a living to support her desires of what she really wants.
Weapons (if any): Prophecies: Swords, Throwing knives, guns. Equipped: Curved sword that she keeps with her as well as a Choridum Injection Gun at her side she keeps for personal protection some nails and screws.
Equipment (if any): Keeps a curved sword on her as well as a Choridum Injection Gun , a large enough personal bag say like a pocketbook that she keeps shots for her gun in, 20 medium size screws, 10 large nails and five small nails made of the metal alkaloids that she can control to use as weapons when needed.
Back Story: Lyra is the youngest of a family with six children. She is the only female and the only force user of the family. For this she was shunned and looked down upon. Her family disowned her and sent her away to never return. For this, years of pent up anger has stayed hidden in her heart. She has not only been looked down upon by her family, but by those she has seen on the streets and even by those she thought was friends and those she trusted. She trusts no one and looks to one day make people see that Force users are just as good if not better than regular humans. She holds anger at those who oppose her and any other force user and will one day make non force users regret being alive.
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Skyrim
Name: Janette Fairfax
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Appearance: Blond hair, gray eyes, skinny frame, 5'11.
User Unit : Undetermined
Registry Code: D4AF371
User Abilities: Force Lightning
Capable of generating powerful currents of electricity and manipulate it. Its power is beyond what is normally found in Force Users of electric nature--even able to absorb electricity.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Unknown
Occupation (if any): lab rat
Skills/Hobbies (if any): None
Financial/Societal Caste: N/A
Weapons (if any): None
Equipment (if any): None
Back Story: She doesn't know where he came from or how he came to be. All she remembers was being found by the men in suits as a young child. She's lived in laboratory after laboratory, with test after test. She's survived each of the grueling tests that have been thrown at him, overcoming and continuing, pondering the purpose of her existence.
Name: Janette Fairfax
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Appearance: Blond hair, gray eyes, skinny frame, 5'11.
User Unit : Undetermined
Registry Code: D4AF371
User Abilities: Force Lightning
Capable of generating powerful currents of electricity and manipulate it. Its power is beyond what is normally found in Force Users of electric nature--even able to absorb electricity.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Unknown
Occupation (if any): lab rat
Skills/Hobbies (if any): None
Financial/Societal Caste: N/A
Weapons (if any): None
Equipment (if any): None
Back Story: She doesn't know where he came from or how he came to be. All she remembers was being found by the men in suits as a young child. She's lived in laboratory after laboratory, with test after test. She's survived each of the grueling tests that have been thrown at him, overcoming and continuing, pondering the purpose of her existence.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Pendulum by Shiki
Name: Reiki Ushida
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Dark-geisha-203404940?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=11
User Unit : UU3
Registry Code: Unregistered
User Abilities:
Force Compulsion – When activated, her victim is compelled to follow whatever orders she gives. The compulsion can be used on a crowd, but the strength of the compulsion is greatly reduced the more people she attempts to compel. The compulsion is not unbreakable, and a strong enough will can bring the victim back to their senses. Strong emotion – anger, fear, etc – also makes it easier to break free from the compulsion. The strength of the compulsion varies depending on circumstances – for example, it is naturally stronger when she is compelling a young male who is attracted to her, as opposed to a gentleman who has no interest whatsoever.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Ilkairteon, in the Dravens-Terrance Mental Hospital, a chordium structured mental hospital for clinically insane Force Users.
Occupation (if any): Seamstress and former mental patient.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Sewing, some shoemaking, and is an expert at making needlepoint lace.
Financial/Societal Caste: Poor
Weapons (if any): Three knives, of varying lengths.
Equipment (if any): Scissors, thread and cloth, sewing needles of various sizes, and other sewing equipment in her shop. She also has a first aid kid in her house and a shovel in her workshop.
Back Story:
Notable Hallucinations:
January: A young woman who is highly verbally abusive to Reiki. Her approval is rare and welcome. She strives only for perfection and nothing less.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Elf-257332989?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=32
Northwest: A wolverine hallucination. The creature has a taste for violence and rarely leaves Reiki alone when he hungers for it.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Paizo-monster-Fey-Wolverine-270694108?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=36
Damask: An odd looking female. She speaks almost lyrically, but seems to be the most rational and cool-headed of her hallucinations. Is a planner.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Carnaval-113125140?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=41
Name: Reiki Ushida
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Dark-geisha-203404940?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=11
User Unit : UU3
Registry Code: Unregistered
User Abilities:
Force Compulsion – When activated, her victim is compelled to follow whatever orders she gives. The compulsion can be used on a crowd, but the strength of the compulsion is greatly reduced the more people she attempts to compel. The compulsion is not unbreakable, and a strong enough will can bring the victim back to their senses. Strong emotion – anger, fear, etc – also makes it easier to break free from the compulsion. The strength of the compulsion varies depending on circumstances – for example, it is naturally stronger when she is compelling a young male who is attracted to her, as opposed to a gentleman who has no interest whatsoever.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Ilkairteon, in the Dravens-Terrance Mental Hospital, a chordium structured mental hospital for clinically insane Force Users.
Occupation (if any): Seamstress and former mental patient.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Sewing, some shoemaking, and is an expert at making needlepoint lace.
Financial/Societal Caste: Poor
Weapons (if any): Three knives, of varying lengths.
Equipment (if any): Scissors, thread and cloth, sewing needles of various sizes, and other sewing equipment in her shop. She also has a first aid kid in her house and a shovel in her workshop.
Back Story:
- Spoiler:
- Reiki was born in the small town Corthian, the daughter to an old family of tailors and seamstresses. From the time she was five her single mother started teaching her their craft, eventually teaching her to craft the fine, needlepoint lace that the family was renowned for. She fell in love with the work the moment she first learned it, and she would spend hours and hours practicing her craft, especially her lacework. It was her pride and joy.
She might have had a fairly ordinary life, had she not started suffering from hallucinations at 16 years of age. While working on another piece of hers, an elegant woman sat down next to her, and with a critical eye ordered her to “destroy your piece of shit before the world has to see it.”
The woman – or hallucination, rather – called herself January, and she demanded nothing less than perfection from Reiki. Her appearances were irregular and unpredictable, and Reiki started to fear her approach, having trouble sleeping at night and starting to work even more feverishly on her work. Her fingers grew scarred with the number of times she accidentally stabbed herself with her needles. And as she worked herself to exhaustion, her mind only further crumbled.
The cast of her hallucinations expanded further, some of them vaguely human, more of them monstrous, and all of them either abusive or overtly violent. Her notions of reality and fantasy crumbled, and she grew more and more distant from the real world, falling back into her world of nightmares and her pursuit of perfection.
One of these hallucinations, a creature called Northwest, started appearing more and more prominently at 17, demanding that she give him blood. Reiki tried to hide herself in her work, unwilling to follow his orders, and in retaliation Northwest became a constant. He never left her side – he’d follow her in the corner of her eye and take up post at the end of her bed at night, constantly whispering or growling his desires. Her parents, by now, were becoming severely worried by her mental state – during this time she rarely ate, rarely slept, started easily, and openly spoke to her hallucinations. Terrified by their daughter’s words, they called a mental doctor, an ordinary, somewhat pudgy and harmless older man.
But to Reiki’s eyes, he was as much of a monster as the rest of her hallucination. Fire burned in his eyes, and his kind words threatened, and finally out of fear she retaliated against this ‘threat’ – she reached out for her sewing needles as he spoke to her and stabbed it through his eye, deep into his brain.
With her first murder, she was shipped to a high security mental hospital, and diagnosed with severe schizophrenia. No charges were pressed due to her obvious insanity, and the hospital was enough of a prison anyway even without official charges. It might have been suitable punishment, were it not for one thing:
With the murder, her hallucinations stopped.
Northwest no longer hunted her from the corner of her eye, and January no longer pushed her to perfection. For almost a week, she lived in a silent bliss.
Then they were back again, and more besides, with the same threats and demands. January didn’t care that she was provided no needles or thread for her work while in the hospital, and her criticism grew overtly threatening as Northwest returned to stalking her at the corner of her eye. Her condition grew worse, and the world of the hospital was replaced by a land of blackness and nightmares.
The only way to stop them, she realized, was to follow their demands. That required breaking out.
There was no history of force users in her family, and her docility after being brought in meant she was in a lower security area of the facility. Aura checks occurred regularly to determine if anyone had developed a force, and it was between these checks that a new hallucination appeared. The oddly dressed woman introduced herself as Damask, and the other occupants of her world stepped aside to let her pass.
Damask grabbed Reiki’s head with both hands, and told her it was time for them to get out. “With this,” she said, “your task should be made easier.”
Her first force awoke, Force Compulsion, and when the orderly came by for regular testing she used it to walk with him straight out the back door.
Urged on by her hallucinations, she fled to the edge of the Elven Hinterland, and set up a shop there. She wasn’t pursued into the Hinterland – in their minds, she was now the Elves problem to suffer.
She struggled to survive now in the Hinterland, quickly setting up a small shop for her labors – no more than a shack for her to live in and a workhouse next to it. Her hallucinations still failed to leave her, and now with Damask to temper their wild urgings, she planned her next kill with more care. It wasn’t hard to lure a customer into the woods outside her tiny shack and workshop, and she did the deed quickly, taking no pleasure in it.
Her hallucinations gathered around the kill, and as January hovered over the body, her eyes oddly lit up. “Look at him,” she said. “Look at him. Beneath that grime and the shit he wears you could make something amazing. Maybe… perfection.”
Her approval was so wild, so unexpected, that if anything Reiki was excited rather than horrified by what she implied.
Killing became a habit, luring in victims and killing them as cleanly as she could so she could use their bodies for her art – skin for leather shoes and clothes, but more importantly, fibres and hairs for her lace. The lace became her obsession, and with January’s encouragement she decided to make a dress from it.
Reiki is certain – absolutely, unwaveringly certain – that once her perfect creation is complete, and January is content, she will be free of her hallucinations.
Notable Hallucinations:
January: A young woman who is highly verbally abusive to Reiki. Her approval is rare and welcome. She strives only for perfection and nothing less.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Elf-257332989?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=32
Northwest: A wolverine hallucination. The creature has a taste for violence and rarely leaves Reiki alone when he hungers for it.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Paizo-monster-Fey-Wolverine-270694108?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=36
Damask: An odd looking female. She speaks almost lyrically, but seems to be the most rational and cool-headed of her hallucinations. Is a planner.
http://sajaella.deviantart.com/art/Carnaval-113125140?q=favby%3Asajaella%2F54851595&qo=41
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Pendulum by Shiki
Name: Flossie Fernnenty (Also called G.G. as short for Guardian Ghost which is the name of her force and the scientific project)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: (Image without the weapon this girl is holding, she would most likely hold a plush instead of this.) http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1743186
User Unit : 2 (See ability description and BG as to why she is so high at a young age.)
Registry Code: H482819
User Abilities: Force GuardianGhost : This force has been named this way for the fact that in her presence you would always get this feeling while being around her...that another presence is watching you. She can apparently form spirit forms, however even the Scientifics aren't truly sure how her force truly work. She had it since she was two years old and a lot of weird factors would happen whenever she was there. (See the spoiler for details.)
Hometown/City/Reservation: Brielkarta(Current location unknown to the character.)
Occupation (if any): Is held for experimentations. Sometimes is sent out for some jobs that are questionable or some kind of force testing exercise.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Likes reading, Drawing, write in her diary often, talk with the ''ghost'' of her ability.
Financial/Societal Caste: Originally, a mid class. However as it stand she wouldn't have any resource other then was is given to her by the scientific who look after her. They do however pay for her force use.
Weapons (if any): None. If she was on a panic mode however, because her ghost wouldn't be there for whatever the reason, she would grab anything sharp and attack whoever did hurt her best friend ghost. Not that she have any skills with it however.
Equipment (if any): Usually always have at least a book and something to draw on with special drawing pen as well as her diary. The scientific insist on the fact of her writing in it. It help them understand her. She also have a bear plush with her at all time.
Back Story: Born in the town of Srielkarta, Flossie had a talent, or rather a friend to her that she knew since she was only two years old. Already at this age, her parents would have noticed objects moving around her alone more than once. Seeing that, they knew that their life would not be easy. What was weird however was the fact that neither of them were force users, however perhaps the talent had skipped a generation or two. She quickly had to have an ether meter around her wrist, something that her parents had to install themselves as anyone she wouldn't know and be scared of would be pushed away from her.... The way they were pushed though made them wonder if it was truly a force telekinesis. Her parents had to pay at first for the use of their daughter's ability, the bills being very high, even as mid-classes it was often hard to fill their other bills on the side of this. Things started to change quite a bit once she started to go at school however. She was persecuted for being a force user all the time, not that she cared, she had her friend with her. In fact the way she was talking alone all the time made the other kids get away from her all the more, thinking it was rather freaky or else. The older she would get, the more she would do it.
The direction of the school she would be going to had a close eye on her however, considering they thought she could have some problems. Eventually however some children gathered together to try and make a joke, that turned out pretty badly. Their plan had been only to splash out some nasty mix of food on her to try and get her out of her bubble. They had gotten her with the first shot, which made her cry and run at the time, however their second shot... provoked something that they probably would not have wanted to feel on that day. Her guardian ghost blocked the second hit, going right away for however shot the bowl, grabbing and twisting the arms of this poor kid. She continued crying at the time, being on her knee and having a somehow very neutral and cold look while doing this to those kids. Due to the high amount of ether she used at that time however, the school direction was able to know there was something up. Many were hurt by trying to approach her... till her parents were the ones to finally come, horrified by the sight of what their daughter had done. They were the only ones however that had been able to calm her down and bring her home for now to show to her that everything was normal when it wasn't.
It wasn't long after those events however that some agent and Scientifics came to her home to bring her somewhere else. To do so however, they requested that her parents would be there to guide her with trust to her ''transport room'' that wasn't any less than a cell. Once at destination however, they said they had to leave her with these people for now and would be back some other time. Something that never happened as even her own parents were now afraid of her... Ever since that day she have been held where they brought her for several experimentation. One thing they had learn about was her aggressive and panicked act whenever her force was deactivated as well as high confusion. They would let her have her friend with her at all time for measures of keeping her trust to keep on doing those experiment and perhaps use her from time to time when they would need to get rid of some nuisance. Those scientific people would most likely be working for someone, but the question was who ?...
As she would approach her victim who would have been just like a ''test'' the scientific would have used for her to get, her only words would always be ''Do you want to play with me ?....'' Only to be followed by scream of agony she most likely did not know the reality of, to her it was all, but a game.
Name: Flossie Fernnenty (Also called G.G. as short for Guardian Ghost which is the name of her force and the scientific project)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: (Image without the weapon this girl is holding, she would most likely hold a plush instead of this.) http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1743186
User Unit : 2 (See ability description and BG as to why she is so high at a young age.)
Registry Code: H482819
User Abilities: Force GuardianGhost : This force has been named this way for the fact that in her presence you would always get this feeling while being around her...that another presence is watching you. She can apparently form spirit forms, however even the Scientifics aren't truly sure how her force truly work. She had it since she was two years old and a lot of weird factors would happen whenever she was there. (See the spoiler for details.)
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- The ghost she have in control is in fact one single ghost with a lot of arms who can stretch out to reach her targets. She is the only one who can normally see this, however some force users or machine may be able to detect the movement or see something due to the ether. Her ghost is most of the time positioned behind her to defend her by grabbing weapons thrown at her or blocking attacks by wrapping her into his arms. If come in reach however the ghost will try and take a hold of her target, most likely try to break something or twist them in some manner that would be very painful. This ghost could also grab her and run on his arms in a spider-ish way if there was a need for them to escape.
As normal life use the ghost would often grab things she needs, making it look like those are floating in the void and thus why many at first thought she was a telekinesis. It wasn't the case however.
The number of arms is approx. 30 and their range is about 65 feet if only a few arms(less than 10) stretch out from the ghost. If almost all of them would stretch out their range is reduced to approx 33 feet.
If her force was to be deactivated for some reason and her ghost would disappear, she would panic, get hysterical and would react in rage as if she had just lost her real best friend. It would be hard to approach her with any bad intention however to place a collar against force.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Brielkarta(Current location unknown to the character.)
Occupation (if any): Is held for experimentations. Sometimes is sent out for some jobs that are questionable or some kind of force testing exercise.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Likes reading, Drawing, write in her diary often, talk with the ''ghost'' of her ability.
Financial/Societal Caste: Originally, a mid class. However as it stand she wouldn't have any resource other then was is given to her by the scientific who look after her. They do however pay for her force use.
Weapons (if any): None. If she was on a panic mode however, because her ghost wouldn't be there for whatever the reason, she would grab anything sharp and attack whoever did hurt her best friend ghost. Not that she have any skills with it however.
Equipment (if any): Usually always have at least a book and something to draw on with special drawing pen as well as her diary. The scientific insist on the fact of her writing in it. It help them understand her. She also have a bear plush with her at all time.
Back Story: Born in the town of Srielkarta, Flossie had a talent, or rather a friend to her that she knew since she was only two years old. Already at this age, her parents would have noticed objects moving around her alone more than once. Seeing that, they knew that their life would not be easy. What was weird however was the fact that neither of them were force users, however perhaps the talent had skipped a generation or two. She quickly had to have an ether meter around her wrist, something that her parents had to install themselves as anyone she wouldn't know and be scared of would be pushed away from her.... The way they were pushed though made them wonder if it was truly a force telekinesis. Her parents had to pay at first for the use of their daughter's ability, the bills being very high, even as mid-classes it was often hard to fill their other bills on the side of this. Things started to change quite a bit once she started to go at school however. She was persecuted for being a force user all the time, not that she cared, she had her friend with her. In fact the way she was talking alone all the time made the other kids get away from her all the more, thinking it was rather freaky or else. The older she would get, the more she would do it.
The direction of the school she would be going to had a close eye on her however, considering they thought she could have some problems. Eventually however some children gathered together to try and make a joke, that turned out pretty badly. Their plan had been only to splash out some nasty mix of food on her to try and get her out of her bubble. They had gotten her with the first shot, which made her cry and run at the time, however their second shot... provoked something that they probably would not have wanted to feel on that day. Her guardian ghost blocked the second hit, going right away for however shot the bowl, grabbing and twisting the arms of this poor kid. She continued crying at the time, being on her knee and having a somehow very neutral and cold look while doing this to those kids. Due to the high amount of ether she used at that time however, the school direction was able to know there was something up. Many were hurt by trying to approach her... till her parents were the ones to finally come, horrified by the sight of what their daughter had done. They were the only ones however that had been able to calm her down and bring her home for now to show to her that everything was normal when it wasn't.
It wasn't long after those events however that some agent and Scientifics came to her home to bring her somewhere else. To do so however, they requested that her parents would be there to guide her with trust to her ''transport room'' that wasn't any less than a cell. Once at destination however, they said they had to leave her with these people for now and would be back some other time. Something that never happened as even her own parents were now afraid of her... Ever since that day she have been held where they brought her for several experimentation. One thing they had learn about was her aggressive and panicked act whenever her force was deactivated as well as high confusion. They would let her have her friend with her at all time for measures of keeping her trust to keep on doing those experiment and perhaps use her from time to time when they would need to get rid of some nuisance. Those scientific people would most likely be working for someone, but the question was who ?...
As she would approach her victim who would have been just like a ''test'' the scientific would have used for her to get, her only words would always be ''Do you want to play with me ?....'' Only to be followed by scream of agony she most likely did not know the reality of, to her it was all, but a game.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: "Radioactive" by Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix
Name: Ettan Thackaery
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
User Unit : 6
Registry Code: N/A
User Abilities: Force Vampirism: Allows the user to passively sap energy from others around them, giving them more physical and mental energy. This transaction is amplified when there is direct contact between the body of the force user and another body.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Dedonia
Occupation (if any): Student
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Enjoys archery and soccer
Financial/Societal Caste: Wealthy
Weapons (if any): Proficient with the compound bow and crossbow
Equipment (if any): Compound bow, Crossbow, quiver full of blunted training arrows
Back Story: Ettan was born to a non force wealthy family with the father being a corporate businessman who one of the heads of a popular shipping company, and also a big stock holder in the oil industry. Ettan's older sister was a perfect child, so his parents wanted no less when Ettan was born. He seemed to be another perfect child; he did well in private school, excelled in class and archery, and managed to make plenty of friends at soccer practice. One thing seemed "off", though. Whenever Ettan's parents spent time with him, they always felt like they had less energy then they had earlier. Ettan was a rather active child and he always wanted to do something, so his parents only thought it was natural that spending time with him would drain their energy.
Suspicion arose when Ettan's sister found a strange pattern whenever she was around him. Every time she left Ettan to himself, she felt refreshed and re-energized, even when she wasn't doing anything with Ettan. His sister told their parents, but they reassured that it was nothing-they even joked about it from time to time, secretly fearing that something might be wrong. A week later, Ettan's mom nearly passed out on the street while holding Ettan's hand and waiting for the bus to arrive. Ettan wasn't aware of his abilities, and neither were his parents, so the whole ordeal was thought to have come from stress and a lack of sleep. Even weirder, Ettan's teachers always reported to his parents that he was making lots of friends and enjoyed being around other students, but the students always complained of feeling tired, especially the ones that had recently talked to Ettan.
Ettan's father was the first to deny that Ettan may be a force user. The news that Ettan had a force ability could reflect badly on the family or even the company his father worked for. Soon, Ettan's mother denied the idea that Ettan was a force user as well, but Ettan's sister was old enough at the time to see that she was right all along. However, Ettan's sister didn't want to defy her parents, so she kept her ideas to herself. Since then, Ettan's parents continued hiding Ettan and themselves from the truth, blaming any unusual occurrences on lack of sleep, or "just feeling tired". In the meantime, Ettan continued living his perfect little life, unaware of the effect he has on anyone who comes in contact with him.
Name: Ettan Thackaery
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
- Spoiler:
User Unit : 6
Registry Code: N/A
User Abilities: Force Vampirism: Allows the user to passively sap energy from others around them, giving them more physical and mental energy. This transaction is amplified when there is direct contact between the body of the force user and another body.
- Spoiler:
- At Ettan's user level, he can sap energy from up to 5 people at once. The transfer of energy is small, but the effects can be felt over extended periods of time.
5 min-Target barely feels any fatigue
10 min-Target may feel some fatigue, either mental or physical, depending on health and resilience of target
30 min-Target undeniably begins to feel tired, level of fatigue depending on target's health and resilience
1 hr-Target becomes tired, may have difficulty performing at top level
1 hr 30 min-Target becomes severely tired, may have difficulty thinking critically or executing vigorous actions
+1 hr 50 min-Target becomes too tired to move some limbs, possibility of fainting increases
When direct contact is involved, the amount of energy stolen is doubled. All targets must be within a 10ft radius for their energy to be sapped. In Ettan's case, this ability triggers whenever another person meets this requirement. This ability does not work through thick walls or through liquids. The user will experience an "overload" effect after they've sapped more energy than their body can handle: they will feel an acute sense of euphoria while being extremely overactive and restless, so much so that the user won't be able to keep their hands, arms, feet, or whatever body part from moving. The absolute extreme of the overload effect is a high level of euphoria followed by uncontrollable muscle spasms, leading to a crippling seizure.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Dedonia
Occupation (if any): Student
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Enjoys archery and soccer
Financial/Societal Caste: Wealthy
Weapons (if any): Proficient with the compound bow and crossbow
Equipment (if any): Compound bow, Crossbow, quiver full of blunted training arrows
Back Story: Ettan was born to a non force wealthy family with the father being a corporate businessman who one of the heads of a popular shipping company, and also a big stock holder in the oil industry. Ettan's older sister was a perfect child, so his parents wanted no less when Ettan was born. He seemed to be another perfect child; he did well in private school, excelled in class and archery, and managed to make plenty of friends at soccer practice. One thing seemed "off", though. Whenever Ettan's parents spent time with him, they always felt like they had less energy then they had earlier. Ettan was a rather active child and he always wanted to do something, so his parents only thought it was natural that spending time with him would drain their energy.
Suspicion arose when Ettan's sister found a strange pattern whenever she was around him. Every time she left Ettan to himself, she felt refreshed and re-energized, even when she wasn't doing anything with Ettan. His sister told their parents, but they reassured that it was nothing-they even joked about it from time to time, secretly fearing that something might be wrong. A week later, Ettan's mom nearly passed out on the street while holding Ettan's hand and waiting for the bus to arrive. Ettan wasn't aware of his abilities, and neither were his parents, so the whole ordeal was thought to have come from stress and a lack of sleep. Even weirder, Ettan's teachers always reported to his parents that he was making lots of friends and enjoyed being around other students, but the students always complained of feeling tired, especially the ones that had recently talked to Ettan.
Ettan's father was the first to deny that Ettan may be a force user. The news that Ettan had a force ability could reflect badly on the family or even the company his father worked for. Soon, Ettan's mother denied the idea that Ettan was a force user as well, but Ettan's sister was old enough at the time to see that she was right all along. However, Ettan's sister didn't want to defy her parents, so she kept her ideas to herself. Since then, Ettan's parents continued hiding Ettan and themselves from the truth, blaming any unusual occurrences on lack of sleep, or "just feeling tired". In the meantime, Ettan continued living his perfect little life, unaware of the effect he has on anyone who comes in contact with him.
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My Competition Entry
Contest Theme Choice: "Titanium" featuring Sia by David Guetta
Name: Garret "Sharpeye" Cardal
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Appearance: https://2img.net/r/ihimg/a/img208/3931/garretcaralsharpeye.jpg Here's a close enough picture to what I was thinking of. Garret's hair is a bit longer and wavy and he is almost never clean shaven, but does keep it very neat.
User Unit : NONE
Registry Code: 4UN73R9 (for the use of his Ether Rounds, but he actually pays it ahead of time, read below)
User Abilities: NONE
Hometown/City/Reservation: Coldrion (where he developed the aforementioned Ether Rounds)
Occupation (if any): Reliable Bounty Hunter. Guns for hire, literally guns, many. He's also co-proprietor of Ether Rounds. :D
Skills/Hobbies (if any):
Skills:
- Grade A Refined Ether Rounds: Because of his inability to use Force Abilities, Garret was forced to help Rastler, an arms dealer, developed a patented Ether Round projectile. This projectile works like a regular Force ability, with the exception that it must be Refined with a single ability in mind. Some of the more common Refined Ether Rounds are elemental shots, varying from fire, to ice, or electricity, some explosive, some high impact. The drawback is that these bullets/abilities are not paid for when used they must be refined and paid for ahead of time which give Garret a limited variety of his "force" bullets.
- Veteran Special Operative: Was dishonorable discharge with merits after the loss of his entire squad.
- Revolver Pistol Mastery: Garrets has an uncanny skill to be able to shoot the wings off a fly and 10 paces, and can score a bulls eye at 25 yards.
- Machine Pistol Mastery: Using his innate accuracy Garret is able to manipulate the extremely unreliable machine pistol as if it was a regular pistol.
- Sharp Shooting: Garret is a knows sharpshooter and can easily hit a target 1000 yards away.
Hobbies:
- Meticulously takes care of his guns and gun collection.
- He finds manually melting and casting bullets very calming.
- His dexterity with guns lends itself very well to the dance floor where he glides almost effortlessly through non-choreographed moves.
- His tactical thinking allows him to indulge with many strategy games.
- Bounty Hunting, yes it's a hobby because he is a co-proprietor of a company that furnishes many technological marvels and is the ONLY source of his special Ether Rounds, so he doesn't need money.
Financial/Societal Caste: Co-Owner of a Company, Ethtech. Being the co-proprietor of the Ether Rounds made him well off and it's lucratity has proven useful when taking on some higher class bounties.
Weapons (if any):
- Revolver Pistol: The trusty six shooter rotating Ether Rounds firearm.
- Machine Pistol: 20 round spring loaded, extremely unreliable pistol made solely to intimidate enemies, uses cheap lead rounds. (Garret uses it unbelievably well)
- Mach Flintlock Rifle: Single round, extremely long range rifle capable of firing Ether Rounds, Cordium alloy rounds and Darts of various poisons and Ethers to incapacitate Force-Users.
Equipment (if any):
- Gun Holsters
- Survival Pack
- Leather Vest
- Leather Coat
- Natural Occurring Cordium Bracelet to be able to stabilize Ether within his vicinity.
- XV-9 Super slim Exosuit: Special Operatives enhanced matrix full body suit that increases all physical attributes. Has been heavily modified by his company to be far superior to the XV-1 military model. XV-9 Super slim Exosuit is worn under his leathers.
Back Story:
I find direct background stories overrated I like people discovering my characters through RP (weather I RP them or not) so instead I'll give you a scene in which you discover a bit about him.
Name: Garret "Sharpeye" Cardal
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Appearance: https://2img.net/r/ihimg/a/img208/3931/garretcaralsharpeye.jpg Here's a close enough picture to what I was thinking of. Garret's hair is a bit longer and wavy and he is almost never clean shaven, but does keep it very neat.
User Unit : NONE
Registry Code: 4UN73R9 (for the use of his Ether Rounds, but he actually pays it ahead of time, read below)
User Abilities: NONE
Hometown/City/Reservation: Coldrion (where he developed the aforementioned Ether Rounds)
Occupation (if any): Reliable Bounty Hunter. Guns for hire, literally guns, many. He's also co-proprietor of Ether Rounds. :D
Skills/Hobbies (if any):
Skills:
- Grade A Refined Ether Rounds: Because of his inability to use Force Abilities, Garret was forced to help Rastler, an arms dealer, developed a patented Ether Round projectile. This projectile works like a regular Force ability, with the exception that it must be Refined with a single ability in mind. Some of the more common Refined Ether Rounds are elemental shots, varying from fire, to ice, or electricity, some explosive, some high impact. The drawback is that these bullets/abilities are not paid for when used they must be refined and paid for ahead of time which give Garret a limited variety of his "force" bullets.
- Veteran Special Operative: Was dishonorable discharge with merits after the loss of his entire squad.
- Revolver Pistol Mastery: Garrets has an uncanny skill to be able to shoot the wings off a fly and 10 paces, and can score a bulls eye at 25 yards.
- Machine Pistol Mastery: Using his innate accuracy Garret is able to manipulate the extremely unreliable machine pistol as if it was a regular pistol.
- Sharp Shooting: Garret is a knows sharpshooter and can easily hit a target 1000 yards away.
Hobbies:
- Meticulously takes care of his guns and gun collection.
- He finds manually melting and casting bullets very calming.
- His dexterity with guns lends itself very well to the dance floor where he glides almost effortlessly through non-choreographed moves.
- His tactical thinking allows him to indulge with many strategy games.
- Bounty Hunting, yes it's a hobby because he is a co-proprietor of a company that furnishes many technological marvels and is the ONLY source of his special Ether Rounds, so he doesn't need money.
Financial/Societal Caste: Co-Owner of a Company, Ethtech. Being the co-proprietor of the Ether Rounds made him well off and it's lucratity has proven useful when taking on some higher class bounties.
Weapons (if any):
- Revolver Pistol: The trusty six shooter rotating Ether Rounds firearm.
- Machine Pistol: 20 round spring loaded, extremely unreliable pistol made solely to intimidate enemies, uses cheap lead rounds. (Garret uses it unbelievably well)
- Mach Flintlock Rifle: Single round, extremely long range rifle capable of firing Ether Rounds, Cordium alloy rounds and Darts of various poisons and Ethers to incapacitate Force-Users.
- Ether Rounds:
- - Fire Rounds: Incendiary rounds that burst into flames when fired. The flames set fire to, and penetrate most unprotected obstructions.
- Ice Rounds: A round that explodes on contact instantly encasing anything within 12 inches in ice.
- Electric Rounds: Essentially and tazer/stun bullet.
- Explosive Rounds: Essentially and super concentrated Fire Round that explode violently on contact.
- High Impact Round: A "force push" bullet meant to knock back or send people flying backwards.
Potentially others, when he meets other force-user willing to share their power he collaborates with them to developed another "new" round that is a weaker version of the force-users power.
Equipment (if any):
- Gun Holsters
- Survival Pack
- Leather Vest
- Leather Coat
- Natural Occurring Cordium Bracelet to be able to stabilize Ether within his vicinity.
- XV-9 Super slim Exosuit: Special Operatives enhanced matrix full body suit that increases all physical attributes. Has been heavily modified by his company to be far superior to the XV-1 military model. XV-9 Super slim Exosuit is worn under his leathers.
Back Story:
I find direct background stories overrated I like people discovering my characters through RP (weather I RP them or not) so instead I'll give you a scene in which you discover a bit about him.
- Scene:
- A handsome man walks into a bar, he unties the belts to his leather coat and faintly glowing lights can be seems under his shirt collar. He casually walks over to the counter and orders a shot. Almost everyone's eyes are on him, until he takes the first sip.
A young lade approaches. "Hey thar, sir. You don't seem to be from around these parts. Need a hand?"
His chiseled face slowly turns to and sharp bright green-brown eyes pierce right through her. "You'd be right about that, hunny. I'm here on business. No, don't worry, there's no trouble here in this bar, I'm just passing through."
The night carries on and Garret, the man with green-brown eyes, and the young lady move over to a bench where he tells her about himself.
"Times were tough growing up. I had to work hard and long in order to just make ends meet. Force-users had it easy, they just used their powers and got paid, all-be-it minus their usage. That's why I became a hunter, to bring those low life power hungry users in, to stop the hemorrhaging of ether from this planet because of them. It's just, fighting a force-user without any powers of your own is, well, it's impossible. That's when I met Rastler. His entrepreneurship and my dedication to the cause, helped co-create the Ether Round." He pulls out a bullet casing from his belt and starts flicking it between his fingers from thumb to pinky and pinky to thumb. "These babies cost more money than ether, and pack twice the punch any of those UU-3s got."
The young lady gawks at him and moves closer placing her hand on his lap.
"Right, where did it all start? Well, I was part of the Special Operatives assigned to cease and desist certain users for the exorbitant use of Ether. They didn't like us trying to pull the plug on them and took it out on us. Half my squad was killed and the others, including myself, suffered from pretty grievous wounds."
His story didn't carry on much longer before she was pulling him away to a private room. The night's events carried on under the sheets and by dawn she was sleeping on his bare chest while he woke and placed his arm behind his head. She had a small spot of drool that left a cool tingle on his skin. Slowly slinking out of bed he let her sleep as he put on his Special Operative Exosuit, then doned his fitted leather vest to hide the lights of the suit and leather jacket over it.
He slings his twin revolvers in arm holsters, the machine pistol in a back holster hidden under his coat and the rifle on a strap hanging from his back. He leaves a note on the bedside table.
Thanks for the night, doll. I'll see you around.
XOXO Sharpeye
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: Radioactive
Name: Vera Salas
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: **Image Here**
User Unit : 6
Registry Code: I632AO
User Abilities: Force Tragedy
When her emotions reach a fever pitch, she releases a wave of heartbreaking despair that entrenches those within her radius with a seeming eternity of despair, making them relive their most tragic moments intensified. Those who've been caught up in it have been left crippled, mad, or killed themselves.
Hometown/City/Reservation: None. Nomadic
Occupation (if any): Was the daughter of a florist until her power manifested.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Gardening, knitting, dancing
Financial/Societal Caste: Originally middle class, now poor
Weapons (if any): None
Equipment (if any): None
Back Story: A cheerful, happy-go-lucky girl, she lived a normal life assisting her mother at her flower shop until tragedy struck. A local gang was extorting "protection" money and when her mother refused to pay, they not only burned down the shop, but beat them both and forced Vera to watch her mother be raped before they turned their attentions on her. She managed to escape, but lost her mother in the fire.
From there, she was in a catatonic state for many months as she became part of the foster system, in and out of one broken home to the next. Finally, at one family's, her powers manifested and she exposed the entire household to despair. Most of the adults killed themselves, the ones that didn't were left quivering and babbling along with the children.
She ran, then, falling from one place to the next, always on the move. She was caught by Etherhounds and branded, but in transit her power manifested and the entire crew died. She wanders aimlessly from town to town, now, living off of scraps and avoiding human contact.
Name: Vera Salas
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: **Image Here**
User Unit : 6
Registry Code: I632AO
User Abilities: Force Tragedy
When her emotions reach a fever pitch, she releases a wave of heartbreaking despair that entrenches those within her radius with a seeming eternity of despair, making them relive their most tragic moments intensified. Those who've been caught up in it have been left crippled, mad, or killed themselves.
Hometown/City/Reservation: None. Nomadic
Occupation (if any): Was the daughter of a florist until her power manifested.
Skills/Hobbies (if any): Gardening, knitting, dancing
Financial/Societal Caste: Originally middle class, now poor
Weapons (if any): None
Equipment (if any): None
Back Story: A cheerful, happy-go-lucky girl, she lived a normal life assisting her mother at her flower shop until tragedy struck. A local gang was extorting "protection" money and when her mother refused to pay, they not only burned down the shop, but beat them both and forced Vera to watch her mother be raped before they turned their attentions on her. She managed to escape, but lost her mother in the fire.
From there, she was in a catatonic state for many months as she became part of the foster system, in and out of one broken home to the next. Finally, at one family's, her powers manifested and she exposed the entire household to despair. Most of the adults killed themselves, the ones that didn't were left quivering and babbling along with the children.
She ran, then, falling from one place to the next, always on the move. She was caught by Etherhounds and branded, but in transit her power manifested and the entire crew died. She wanders aimlessly from town to town, now, living off of scraps and avoiding human contact.
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Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Contest Theme Choice: "Pendulum" by Shiki
Name: Aeron Mathias
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Appearance:
User Unit : UU2 on Force Insanity UU3 on Force Necro
Registry Code: 03ATH01
User Abilities:
Force Insanity -- In a set radius he is able to cause insanity on a person.
Force Necro -- The ability to reanimate the dead.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Industrial Commonwealth of Mittgar
Occupation (if any): Waiter
Skills/Hobbies (if any): He has excellent people skills. Very good marksman ship. Creepy obsession with watching people.
Financial/Societal Caste: Moderately Wealthy
Weapons (if any): Himself. Small fire arms.
Equipment (if any): A necklace of a hawk that he keeps on his person at all times. Ether Meter. Military class pistol(where he acquired it is unknown)
Back Story:
At a young age, Aeron suffered from a mental illness. No one was completely certain if it was due to a birth defect or trauma. He was always very quiet, and almost eerily watchful. He never once actually hurt anyone, but the intent in his gaze and actions were clear. If he thought he could get away from it, he would have. He held no emotion, and lacked a sense of moral responsibility or social conscience--most commonly known as a sociopath. By age 7 his illness manifested into a Force, and it was decided that the force is what caused him to be as he was.
His mother admitted him into a mental hospital to keep him away from the public. While there they kept his mouth securely closed shut due to his Insanity force being projected through his voice. Watching the others around him, he learned to mimic the signs of being socially aware. When he turned 18, they released him, deeming him fit to be with the public. It wasn't long afterwards that he got a job as a waiter in a high class restaurant. Being around people he absolutely loved it.
One night, he met a woman that interested him. Using his exceptionally good people skills, he talked her into coming home with him. Expecting a good time, she was horrifically mistaken. The longer she stayed in his presence. The more he talked, the more insanity began to take route into her mind. She quickly spiraled out of control. He just watched with an unblinking stare as she finally was reduced to a whimpering, blabbling mess on the floor. He left her there, until she finally died of thirst and hunger. He was upset that she had died, since it was never really his intention, and in his desire to see her move again, his second force was created.
He travels sometimes, to see the different sights of the world outside his city. Leaving a trail of untraceable victims behind him. He knows eventually he will be caught, but the beauty of his condition? He doesn't care...
Name: Aeron Mathias
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Appearance:
- Spoiler:
User Unit : UU2 on Force Insanity UU3 on Force Necro
Registry Code: 03ATH01
User Abilities:
Force Insanity -- In a set radius he is able to cause insanity on a person.
- Spoiler:
- When speaking, his very words causes insanity. It starts out as quiet whisperings in your mind, and escalates to mind numbing terror. Doesn't matter what he is talking about, whether it is puppies or a slaughter, it drives one into completely and utter insanity. The closer you are, the worse it is. Depending on how long the victim is exposed to it, decides how much lasting damage the victim has. Someone exposed for a few hours would have minimal damage and get better within a few hours. One exposed for weeks may never truly recover from it. Depending on the type of personality the victims possessed would determine what kind of insanity the person was inflicted. Example: One could simple be curled up in the corner babbling away, one could be terrified, hiding from any and everything, or one could simply be in an uncontrollable rage.
Force Necro -- The ability to reanimate the dead.
- Spoiler:
- Through touch he can reanimate dead cells. This touch doesn't necessarily have to be on the thing in question however, for example: if he has a piece of hair from a corpse he can use it to reanimate it. The thing being reanimated isn't truly alive, it is merely a shell or husk of its former self. He can make them move, blink, breathe, etc, but they can not talk or remember anything from when they are alive. In the most extreme case he can make them attack people in much the same way a zombie would. For the more extreme case he must have complete concentration, and it drains him a lot.
Hometown/City/Reservation: Industrial Commonwealth of Mittgar
Occupation (if any): Waiter
Skills/Hobbies (if any): He has excellent people skills. Very good marksman ship. Creepy obsession with watching people.
Financial/Societal Caste: Moderately Wealthy
Weapons (if any): Himself. Small fire arms.
Equipment (if any): A necklace of a hawk that he keeps on his person at all times. Ether Meter. Military class pistol(where he acquired it is unknown)
Back Story:
At a young age, Aeron suffered from a mental illness. No one was completely certain if it was due to a birth defect or trauma. He was always very quiet, and almost eerily watchful. He never once actually hurt anyone, but the intent in his gaze and actions were clear. If he thought he could get away from it, he would have. He held no emotion, and lacked a sense of moral responsibility or social conscience--most commonly known as a sociopath. By age 7 his illness manifested into a Force, and it was decided that the force is what caused him to be as he was.
His mother admitted him into a mental hospital to keep him away from the public. While there they kept his mouth securely closed shut due to his Insanity force being projected through his voice. Watching the others around him, he learned to mimic the signs of being socially aware. When he turned 18, they released him, deeming him fit to be with the public. It wasn't long afterwards that he got a job as a waiter in a high class restaurant. Being around people he absolutely loved it.
One night, he met a woman that interested him. Using his exceptionally good people skills, he talked her into coming home with him. Expecting a good time, she was horrifically mistaken. The longer she stayed in his presence. The more he talked, the more insanity began to take route into her mind. She quickly spiraled out of control. He just watched with an unblinking stare as she finally was reduced to a whimpering, blabbling mess on the floor. He left her there, until she finally died of thirst and hunger. He was upset that she had died, since it was never really his intention, and in his desire to see her move again, his second force was created.
He travels sometimes, to see the different sights of the world outside his city. Leaving a trail of untraceable victims behind him. He knows eventually he will be caught, but the beauty of his condition? He doesn't care...
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Voting Rules & Regulations
May 3rd, 2013 - May 9th, 2013
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Voting Rules & Regulations
May 3rd, 2013 - May 9th, 2013
1) I would prefer that you not vote for a character you created, but you can.
2) You must fill in all three different character slots in your votes.
3) In order to vote, you must PM myself, Leah7, with the format listed below, or your vote is void.
The votes will work thusly--you must choose different characters. Your first choice will get three points, your second will get two, and your third will get one point. Please select the top three characters that you'd like to see as a villain in the Future Force Role-Play. All votes sent after the deadline will be void. Thank you for all of the submissions and all votes will be appreciated!!!!
Voting Layout: (Required)
- Code:
[b]First Choice:[/b] [i]Character Name[/i] by [u]Member Username[/u]
[b]Second Choice:[/b] [i]Character Name[/i] by [u]Member Username[/u]
[b]Third Choice:[/b] [i]Character Name[/i] by [u]Member Username[/u]
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Congratulations, Participants!!!
Each participant has now been awarded 500GP per submission for participating--thank you for joining the Ultimate Character Creation Contest!!!
The first place winner will gain an extra 1,000GP and the secondary rank text of "Master Character Creator," the second place winner will gain an extra 500GP, the third place winner will gain an extra 300GP, and the top four will become villains in the Future Force Role-Play! Additionally, all other characters will also become NPC's controlled by myself in Future Force.
**Please remember to vote for the winners, whether you submitted a character or not!!!! We need as many votes as possible!!!**
Each participant has now been awarded 500GP per submission for participating--thank you for joining the Ultimate Character Creation Contest!!!
The first place winner will gain an extra 1,000GP and the secondary rank text of "Master Character Creator," the second place winner will gain an extra 500GP, the third place winner will gain an extra 300GP, and the top four will become villains in the Future Force Role-Play! Additionally, all other characters will also become NPC's controlled by myself in Future Force.
**Please remember to vote for the winners, whether you submitted a character or not!!!! We need as many votes as possible!!!**
Re: Ultimate Chara Creation Competition
Congratulations, Contest Winners!!!!
Fourth Place:
(Plot Villain)
Janette Fairfax by EphPhoenix
Third Place:
(Plot Villain -- 300GP)
Reiki Ushida by Red
Seoncd Place Tie:
(Plot Villain -- 500GP)
Gareth Everdale by Jack-o-Panda
Ettan Thackaery by Vye-Avis
First Place:
(Plot Villain -- Secondary Rank -- 1,000GP)
Ael'vin Filonistaer by MethosArchaic
Fourth Place:
(Plot Villain)
Janette Fairfax by EphPhoenix
Third Place:
(Plot Villain -- 300GP)
Reiki Ushida by Red
Seoncd Place Tie:
(Plot Villain -- 500GP)
Gareth Everdale by Jack-o-Panda
Ettan Thackaery by Vye-Avis
First Place:
(Plot Villain -- Secondary Rank -- 1,000GP)
Ael'vin Filonistaer by MethosArchaic
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