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Post by Holsety 5th November 2011, 7:37 pm

*Dislcaimer: I did not come up with the idea for this RP, I just adapted it from here.*

Paradisa

At the heart of the multiverse, in the place where all realities converge, there is a world. It is at once everything and nothing; glorious and graceless; soulful and heartless. Some call it Heaven. Others call it H*ll. Its name for itself is Paradisa.

Paradisa is a world of perfect beauty. There is no ugliness apparent anywhere within it. Weather is picturesque any given time of the year, and the skies mostly clear throughout the day, with stars and galaxies and the huge, blue moon appearing at night. It seems that nothing could disturb the peace of this place... and yet, if one is able to look deeper, to part the veils of deception that the world layers over its people's minds, one would discover a seething, roiling darkness at the heart of the world; a darkness that craves souls and memory and desire. No paradise is without flaw.

The nature of Paradisa is to draw those from other worlds into itself; that is how it survives. It gives these forced immigrants a place to live — a beautiful, luxuriant castle with endless floors and chambers, turrets and spires. From the outside, it is not apparent just how large Cair Paradisa is; it is only when one enters the castle that one realizes that it is far larger on the inside than it appears to be on the outside. The inhabitants of the castle can have anything their hearts desire. Endless food and drink and entertainment are available both within the castle and in the quaint and lovely city that surrounds it. Furthermore, they cannot die. Being "killed" merely leads them to be returned to life a mere matter of weeks later (although not without Paradisa having stolen a fraction of their soul).

There is a price to be paid, however, for endless bounty.

Upon arriving in Paradisa, the Travellers (as the people native to the world refer to them) have something precious stripped from them, torn away irrevocably by the darkness that lies at the heart of paradise. Whether this be a priceless item, the memory of one's own true love, one's capability to feel a certain emotion... such depends on the person. It is always something without which the Traveller will suffer in some fashion; for the world feeds on the Travelers' suffering, as well. Furthermore, the Travelers quickly discover that they cannot return to their worlds of origin.

The road to Paradisa only leads in one direction, so be welcome to paradise. And, as always, be wary that things are never as they seem.


What You Can Expect

This is mainly an open RP; most anything can happen. Players will have a lot freedom to do what they want, when they want, within reason. There will be events which will affect the entire player-base, which I will control, but all else is left open. If players wish to have long-term character development or just go with the flow, it matters not.

Canon and original characters are accepted, and there are no character limitations; players can have as many characters as they think they can handle. Canon characters can be from most any media and can be from any point in the timeline of their media. Original characters must be from another RP or story; there can be no characters created solely for this RP.

Canon characters are on a first come first serve basis. If two players want to use the same character, but from different realities or different points on their timeline, the character must be sufficiently different in each reality/timeline. If you wish to use an OC created by somebody else, you must ask their permission first.

This RP will be paragraph style and will follow all the GtR rules. Given the open nature of this RP, inactivity will not be too much of an issue, however if you know you are going to be inactive please give notice so the other players can act accordingly. If a player is inactive for a while and the others with whom they were interacting want to move on, they reserve the right to do so.

The staff members of this RP are:
LadyTwi - RPM
Kiseki - RPH
sagiri - RPH

If they PM you and tell you to change something, please do as they say. Arguing could have grave consequences for your character(s).


The World of Paradisa

Paradisa consists of the castle, the castle grounds, the city royale, and the world beyond.

The castle, Cair Paradisa, is where the residents reside. There are also many public rooms which have unrestricted public access and are where the residents spend most of their time when in the castle.

The castle grounds contain beautiful gardens and no matter the season appear to be picture-perfect. There are a few facilities available in this area.

The city royale surrounds the castle on three sides and is where the native people of Paradisa reside, though characters can move out of the castle and into the city royale if they so desire. It is a pleasant, bustling place with much to offer.

The world beyond is what one enters when they leave the city royale. Everything seems perfect, however as characters travel they may be stopped by barriers. The farther they travel, if they're not stopped, the weaker the character becomes and they will feel a calling to return to the castle.

There is more info on these areas in the discussion thread.


Losses

A loss is the price one pays to come to Paradisa. It is stripped from the resident and devoured, and kept in the castle's "heart." No one has ever found a way to retrieve this. A loss can be a skill/ability, an item, or a memory.

Ability/skill: This will strip a resident from being able to do something that is important or vital to them. This can be a magical ability, the skill to use a certain weapon, etc. The loss acts as a physical restraint or a mental block, impossible to fight back against.

Item: The castle can take an item which is very important to the resident. This item must be something that the resident keeps with them at all times, such as a weapon, or a special keepsake, or something else of significance. This item can not be retrieved, nor will the castle give out replicas or similar items.

Memory: This is a common type of loss, which acts as a mental block. The memory may be of a precious person, friend, lover, partner, event or time period. Sometimes it strips their memory so finely that the resident does not recall the person ever existed, and sometimes it only removes certain things about that person, such as their relationship. Sometimes, when losing the memory of an event, the castle substitutes in an altered memory of it, or other times it just leaves them with a large blank. Of course, residents can learn all about the people or events they forget from other people, but it will never be the same.

It is vaguely known that losses can change when killed or knocked unconscious for a few days, but it is also known that being killed can give a resident an additional loss, rather than changing it. This additional loss may be a significant in-game event or person, as long as the character retains one loss pertaining to his/her/its canon.

There can also be temporary losses. More on this in the discussion thread.


Starting Out

When a character is first taken to Paradisa, they will start out in their room in the castle. They will most likely be confused and disoriented, since they have been swept out of their old life. They will notice there is a journal (info about this in the discussion thread) which has their name on the first page and after that is full of other peoples' writing. They will also hear voices of other residents through it.

Room assignments can be found in the discussion thread.


Check the Discussion Thread

There is a ton of information for this RP and I don't want to clutter up this registration thread, so I will place most of it in the discussion thread. It will hopefully be easy to read so you can quickly find what you're looking for.

I know there is a lot of info there, but you don't need to read it all at once. Read what you think is vital at the moment, then take your time reading things as necessary.


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Post by Holsety 5th November 2011, 10:24 pm

Name: Teepo

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Fandom: Breath of Fire

Canon: Before the events of BoFIII

What they lost: Memory of his best friend Rei. This is important to him because Rei was the only person who cared for him and took him in after he was orphaned.

Appearance: He is 4'3", 70 lbs, with long purple hair and red eyes. Like so.

Personality: Teepo is best described as a punk who dislikes authority and people telling him what to do. He tends to be arrogant and likes to brag to people, which causes him to end up in trouble more often than not. Despite his gruff attitude, he deeply cares for Rei, who is like a brother to him.

Abilities: Good with a sword, good magical ability. Knows the spells: Flare (small fire attactk), Frost (small ice attack), Simoon (small fire and wind attack), Iceblast (medium-sized ice attack), and Fireblast (medium-sized fire attack).

Backstory: Teepo has no memory of his past; all he knows is that he was an orphan in the woods until Rei found him. The pair have lived together in a cabin in the forest ever since, making a living as thieves by stealing from the closest village, McNeil Village, and mugging people on Yraall Road.


Teepo will be assigned to room 201.


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Post by sagiri 6th November 2011, 8:54 am

Name: Phoenix Wright

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Fandom: Ace Attorney

Canon: Post T&T, but before
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What they lost: The magatama. It is a useful item because it lets him see into people's hearts and know when they're hiding something. It also has sentimental value because it was given to him by his assistant, Maya.

Appearance: Tadah~

Personality: Phoenix is a slightly straightlaced but likable man. He sometimes seems a bit dorky, but he's actually very clever and able to bluff his way to the truth. As a defense attorney, he puts his faith in his clients and does everything in his power to make sure justice is served. He has a sarcastic sense of humour, but he tends to keep the more scathing remarks to himself.

Abilities: Lawyer skills!

Backstory: Phoenix was originally studying art until an important case
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resulted in him meeting his mentor, defense attorney Mia Fey, changed his mind. He became a defense attorney with his own courtroom style, relying on his abilities to bluff and think outside the box to ensure his clients are found innocent. After
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Post by Holsety 6th November 2011, 9:02 am

Phoenix is accepted! He will be assigned to room 202, across the hall from Teepo.
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Post by xenolion 6th November 2011, 9:24 am

Name: Kalena

Age: Appears 20 in human years is actually 210 years

Gender: F

Fandom: Feudal Era

Canon: After visiting Everland city

What they lost: She forgot about Kyoshi, the village she grew up in. She still remembers her past there, but she forgot everything else. Kyoshi is important to her because it is her hometown. It is also one of the few places in her world where half breeds are accepted. It is a smaller village that has been able to escape the war, until very recently. It was attacked by demons recently forcing them to flee to Everland City.

Appearance: She is 5’4” Slender build. She has grass green eyes with straight medium brown hair that is down to the middle of her back. She usually has it in a braid or ponytail to keep it out of her way. Her skin is paler than most human, but not as pale as a true elven.

Personality: She is a very spirited young lady, very friendly and a bit naive at times.

Abilities: She has water magic, but has not been trained in it at all. She is skilled with her crossbow and is learning to use daggers given to her by Zhelyr.

Backstory: She grew up in Kyoshi village, abandoned as a baby after her mother died. She grew up in the care of the village temple. She was trained to be a priestess in training. She got sick of the village life and left to visit the other cities. There her life changed forever. She met a group of people, including Zhelyr. Whom she considers her love.

She is a Elven/Human half breed. She only recently found out her father is actually the Elven ruler after being mistaken for her sister and kidnapped by the royal guard. Her world is in at the brink of a war where half breed are being slaughtered. Her group was sent on a mission to visit the royal families to try to bring the balance back to her world.


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Post by Holsety 6th November 2011, 9:57 am

Accepted! She is in room 203, next to Teepo.
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Post by Red 6th November 2011, 12:26 pm

Name: Glen Bordeau

Age: 35

Gender: Male

Fandom: Jump (original fiction)

Canon: After escaping from the second world they arrived at, a small island nation where everyone wore masks because the local religion forbade people from showing off their god-given face.

What they lost: He lost the memory of his three-year-old daughter, Natalie. This is important to him because, what with the shaky relationship he had with his wife, Natalie was the only thing that kept the two of them together. He cared more about his daughter than he did anything else in the world, and was determined to try and break his drinking habits for her sake.

Appearance: About six feet tall, with dark hair, brown eyes, and the beginnings of a beard. He’s a relatively big man, with broad shoulders, and he wears jeans, a stained white shirt, and no shoes.

Personality: He’s usually calm and thoughtful, though he has a temper like an atomic bomb when pushed. He adores children. He is very mature and paternal, and can be very bossy because of it. He is a major realist, but despite that he is very determined to accomplish his goals.

Abilities: A relatively competent knife-fighter, and his experience has taught him how to survive in almost any situation. He has also developed some skill in tracking and stealth.

Backstory: Glen had a shaky relationship with his wife, Lindsey, at best. He was a chronic alcoholic, and the alcohol made his occasional explosions even more violent – the only reason they stayed together so long was because of their mutual adoration of their daughter, Natalie, and their desire for her to have a somewhat normal life.

That all ended when a drunken Glen accidentally tapped into a line of power, one that connects numerous worlds together, and ended up in a canyon on another world for nearly three months. He lapsed into an almost animal state during the time in order to survive, and ended up nearly killing another resident of the place, Adam. Once he finally returned to himself, he vowed to try and make it up to Adam and decided to accompany him, viewing himself as a father figure to the boy, as they both tried to make their way home.

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Post by Kiseki 6th November 2011, 1:18 pm

Name: Garet

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Fandom: Golden Sun

Canon: Directly after the events of Golden Sun: The Lost Age

What they lost: Garet lost all memories of his family. He and his brother, sister, parents, and grandparents all lived in the same house and were quite close.

Appearance: I'm too lazy to write a description

Personality: Garet is often brash and hot tempered, and can be a bit dense at times. He is far from graceful or sophisticated, but he is a loyal friend.

Abilities: Garet is a strong fighter capable of using swords, axes, and maces. He is also a Mars Adept, which gives him the ability to use Psynergy (magic) based on fire and lava.

Backstory: Garet grew up in the isolated village of Vale, located at the foot of Mt. Aleph, as one of the grandchildren of the mayor. When Garet and his best friend Isaac were fourteen, a disaster took place in Vale; a giant boulder fell from the mountain and went through the village. They watched as the boulder caused Isaac’s father and their friend Jenna’s brother and parents to be lost in the river running through Vale. Directly after the event, Garet and Isaac were attacked by two mysterious people and left unconscious.

During the three years that followed, Garet and Isaac dedicated themselves to studying and improving their Psynergy with a scholar named Kraden. One day, Kraden took Garet, Isaac, and Jenna to study the mysterious Mt. Aleph where they discover the four elemental stars.
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Post by Holsety 6th November 2011, 1:22 pm

Name: Apollo Justice

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Fandom: Ace Attorney

Canon: Post-Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney

What they lost: His bracelet. It is important to him because it helps him "perceive the truth", and it's a keepsake he's had for as long as he can remember.

Appearance: Have some pictures! One Two

Personality: His attitude tends to be serious; he is very passionate about what he does and has a strong sense of justice. At times he can be sarcastic and critical, but he is also caring and worries about people. In court he sometimes gets flustered and can be unsure of himself, sometimes showing some stage fright. He likes to make puns with his last name and practice his shouting at all hours of the night.

Abilities: Lawyer skills! He also has the ability to sense other peoples' nervous habits, though he needs his bracelet to help him out with it. There's also his self-proclaimed Chords of Steel.

Backstory: Apollo never knew his parents (and to be honest there is no information about what happened to him between the time his mother abandoned him and when he went to law school). After graduating law school, he went to work for Gavin Law Offices under Kristoph Gavin. This all changed, however, after Gavin ended up
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and his offices were dissolved.

Apollo was then left with no job. He was offered one by Phoenix Wright, but refused it because of Wright's actions during Gavin's trial. However, after two months, he finally gave in and went to Wright's office, where he met Wright's daughter, Trucy. It turned out Wright's agency was actually the Wright Talent Agency, but after hiring Apollo the name was changed to the Wright Anything Agency, since Trucy was a magician and Apollo was a defense attorney.

Apollo took part in four cases with the Wright Anything Agency, including participating in a trial for the new Jurist System. He is still currently employed by the Wright Anything Agency, but work has been kind of slow.


Glen and Garet are accepted! Glen will be in room 204, next to Phoenix Wright. Garet will be in room 205, next to Kalena. Apollo will be in room 206, next to Glen.
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Post by sagiri 6th November 2011, 3:26 pm

Name: Aigis

Age: 10 (looks 16)

Gender: Female

Fandom: Persona 3

Canon: Shortly after meeting the main party (SEES) in Yakushima.

What they lost: Her instinct to protect Minato/all memories of him. This is important because at this point, it's the only real 'emotional' instinct she has for reasons which are outlined in her backstory.

Appearance: Here.

Personality: As a weapon, Aigis does not have any emotions or understanding of human things. She was simply designed to destroy Shadows. However, she has the capacity to grow and when she does develop bonds with people, she proves to be extremely loyal.

Abilities: She is able to use firearms, which are equipped on her body. She can summon her Persona, Palladion, which uses strong physical attacks. She also has a function called Orgia mode which allows her attack power to become stronger for a period of time, though she must cool down after it wears off as using it causes her to overheat.

Backstory: Aigis was created
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Aigis was kept in a Kirijo Group laboratory until the main party visited Yakushima. At that point, she escaped the laboratory and ended up encountering them when the boys were flirting with girls at the beach. The only one she acknowledged was Minato, making it seem like she knew him.
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. She does not really remember the events of ten years ago at this point.
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Post by Holsety 6th November 2011, 3:28 pm

Accepted! Aigis is in room 207, next to Garet.
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Post by Ink 10th November 2011, 2:11 pm

Mmm...do they have to be humanoid or can they be amorphous/other like an imp or something. I was gonna use Midna from LoZ:TP but if not, then I can always use one of my others.
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Post by Holsety 10th November 2011, 2:34 pm

Characters do not have to be humanoid, you can use pretty much any character you want. Midna is completely fine.
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Post by Ink 11th November 2011, 6:12 am

Name: Midna

Age: Uh...Yeah...I'm Gonna Say Unknown

Gender: Female

Fandom: (where are they from? For an OC, which RP/story/etc?) Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess

Canon: After shattering the Twilight Mirror

What they lost: Her Human Form...Again. Why is that a problem? The Imp form is a curse. Said and done

Appearance:
Midna's Imp Form:

Personality: Midna's personality is characterized by a sharp tongue and a tendency to act on whims.

Abilities:
Midna has a variety of powers from her tribe's shadow magic, which include:
-The ability to use her hair like a hand to grab enemies or perform other functions, like opening doors in some dungeons if Link is in his Wolf Link form.
-Levitation
-Grabbing something from outside the Twilight and pulling it into the Twilight (Note that this is available for any Twili)
-Making use of Twilight Portals
-Performing psychokinesis.
-Keeping an item in an unknown hammer space. She has been seen to be able to keep the Ordon Sword, the Ordon Shield, and the Shadow Crystal and have it reappear floating in her hand at will. She may use this power to store Link's items while he is in wolf form.
-The ability to hide in the shadows of light dwellers and appear as a shadow in the Light World.
-Taking the form of other beings.
-The ability to break down her body into Twilight particles. She does this to move through the bars of the cell in which Link was imprisoned.
-The ability to create twilight portals. She is seen doing this after each dungeon boss is defeated (except in the case of Stallord). These portals appear on the ground rather than in the air, unlike other portals. Interestingly, these portals do not take Link to another portal, but instead three take him to Light Spirit springs, and the others take him to the entrances of their dungeons.
-Unlike most of her tribe, she can exist in the Light World outside of shadow form (but only after Zelda heals her).

Backstory: Because I'm too lazy to actually type this whole thing, here's a link (HAH no pun intended) BEWARE!!! The following link contains MAJOR spoilers!!!
Midna Wiki Bio Note: She's the queen of an entire dimension...she has to get back to her realm or the place is the equivalent of having The Joker as the president.


I'm Not Editing This Again. Read The Article In The Link.


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Post by Holsety 11th November 2011, 5:04 pm

Midna is accepted! She will be placed in room 208, next to Apollo.
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Post by Ink 11th November 2011, 5:42 pm

Should I have her wake up now and just wait for you to get there or what?
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Post by Holsety 11th November 2011, 5:44 pm

You don't have to wait for me to do anything. This is an open RP in which you can do whatever you want; Midna can wake up and you can make her go or do whatever.

And please, I would prefer it if questions were kept to the discussion thread.
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Post by Skylar 11th November 2011, 6:33 pm

Name: Yuri Hyuga
Age: About 25
Gender: Male
Fandom: Shadow Hearts series
Canon: After Shadow Hearts but before Covenant
What they lost: Yuri has lost his ability to be a Harmonixer. He can no longer fuse with souls of demon. This is important to him because it was his main way of fighting and part of who he was.
Appearance: Here's a picture.
Personality: Yuri tends to be a smart-aleck and rude, mostly to his enemies.
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his wittiness and brashness has been tempered down though is still present. Yuri is usually laid back and easy going. He’s very loyal and tries to protect his friends. His will power is unmatchable and when he becomes determined do something, he will do whatever it takes to complete his goal.
Abilities: Yuri is a Harmonixer meaning that he can “fuse” with the souls of monsters and demons. This allows him to transform into them at any time he chooses. While he remembers being a Harmonixer, he has lost this ability after entering Paradisa. Yuri is quite skilled in combat. He is a well-trained martial artist and uses bladed knuckles in his fights. He rarely uses any other weapons than these, relying on his own strength and skill to get the job done.
Backstory: Yuri was born in 1890. His family moved throughout China depending on where his father was stationed in the military. Both of his parents died when he was 10 years old. This is when Yuri's fusion ability awakened. After his parents’ death, Yuri lived and traveled alone. During this time, he started hearing a mysterious voice giving him instructions. One adventure (covered in Shadow Hearts), the voice called him to board a train where he saved Alice Elliot from a mysterious man. Together, the two of traveled across Asia and Europe, fighting those that would try to summon the power of gods and demons. They had many trials along the way but in the end, they ultimately prevailed.
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Post by Holsety 11th November 2011, 7:01 pm

Accepted! Yuri is in room 209, next to Aigis.
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Post by Guest 11th November 2011, 8:09 pm

Name: Koga

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Fandom: (where are they from? For an OC, which RP/story/etc?) Inuyasha

Canon: (after which point in their canon storyline does the character enter Paradisa?) After the series

What they lost: (provide a realistic loss for your character that will affect them in some distinct fashion, and explain why it is important to them) His legs. His demonic powers were based on his speed and agility.

Appearance: A human version of himself, but with the lower half of a snake.

Personality: stubborn, yet kind-hearted and protective of what he holds dear.

Abilities: (if applicable) unknown. (will discover as the rp progresses)

Backstory: from the anime
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Post by Holsety 11th November 2011, 8:30 pm

I'm sorry, but a character cannot have a body part removed as a loss, and they absolutely cannot have something else added to them. The character must be true to their canon, with one thing taken away from them (read the loss section again for acceptable losses) and nothing else added or changed. If you wish for him to lose an ability, that's fine, just take the ability.

Also, I would prefer if you wrote in a backstory or linked to one. Not everyone has seen Inuyasha. Same for appearance.

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Post by Holsety 25th November 2011, 7:49 pm

Name: Zhelyr Reduka

Age: Appears 17 (is 178)

Gender: Male

Fandom: Feudal Era RP

Canon: After visiting Everland City

What they lost: His memories of Kalena. He has strong feelings for her and she is a very important person to him.

Appearance: Scruffy silver-grey hair that goes darker at the tips, red-orange eyes, height is about 5'10", he is of average build.

Personality: He is adventurous, free-spirited, and he enjoys killing and doing dirty jobs.

Abilities: Super vision (in daytime only), acute hearing, can summon wings but can't fly for very long, can grow claws. He is also very good with daggers.

Backstory: He lived with his father on Mount Piza until he was driven to Anchorsaur. He didn't want to stay in one place and he wanted to find adventure, so he decided to travel around as a mercenary. Eventually, he ran into Kalena and offered to be her bodyguard, at which point everything changed for him.

He is a human/hawk demon half-breed; over the years he has learned to become distrustful of full-breeds. Now there is a full on war with the full-breeds killing all half-breeds they can find. He, Kalena, and the others were tasked with trying to stop this war.


Zhelyr will be in the recently vacated room 208, next to Apollo.
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Post by Guest 9th December 2011, 8:44 pm

Name: Axel

Age: unknown

Gender: Male

Fandom: Kingdom Hearts (where are they from? For an OC, which RP/story/etc?)

Canon: Right before roxas him and xion get separated. (after which point in their canon storyline does the character enter Paradisa?)

What they lost: His memories of Xion and Roxas. These were important to Axel because xion and Roxas were the only two real friends he had, and they made him feel like he actually had a heart.. even tho you cant feel without a heart. (provide a realistic loss for your character that will affect them in some distinct fashion, and explain why it is important to them)

Appearance: http://www.khinsider.com/gallery/data/media/34/axelextract5up.jpg

Personality: sarcastic, likes to be remembered, playful, serious in combat.

Abilities: Fights with 2 Chakrams and he uses flame powers. (if applicable)

Backstory: Axel is a nobody, there for he was human before but he got turned into a heartless, and since he had a strong heart, his nobody was created... being Axel. He than joined the organization 13 to try and get kingdom hearts so that they could finally have real hearts and feelings. When roxas joins the organization, Axel becomes his friend and mentor, and later on Xion is created and they become an inseperable trio, than axel gets transported to Paradisa and forgets all about his two friends as a pay.
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Post by Holsety 9th December 2011, 9:04 pm

Axel is accepted! He will be in room 210, next to Zhelyr.
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Post by Guest 20th March 2012, 12:55 pm

Name:Kyoya Hibari

Age:14

Gender:Male

Fandom:KAtekyo Hitman reborn

Canon:After Future Arc before Shimon Arc

What they lost:Memory of Namimori Middle. Was important because That was THE most important thing to to him especially since he is head of disiplinary commitee

Appearance:Like so:
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Personality:Cold,unforgiving and hates weaklings and being restrained, don't try and stop him or he'll try and kill u!

Abilities: Fighting with tonfa can use his awesome cloud hedge hog spike balls and his hand cuffs
Backstory:He is Tsuna's gaurdian of the cloud ring, though doesn't like to consider himself as part of any team.Chair man of namimori's disiplinary commitee and most powerful student.(doesn't have much background other than thatXP)
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